Date: May 04 2017 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 25: Punished and Abused
one of the best stories i read on here, for sure, youre a damn hell of an author
Thanks very much, gtsfan91. I've got three of them going right now -- sort of an experiment to see what gets the most reads. Actually, this one is my favorite, although I did want to create something that had a little more thought put into it -- A Thousand Ways to Die is that story.
Date: April 28 2017 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Characters
Glad you brought this story back. Is it me or is it getting more reviews than the first time you posted it? (Not that that's a bad thing obviously. This story is awesome! :D) and sorry for the late review. (Stupid real life stuff -_-)
I think it is getting more reviews than the first time. Thats okay, it doesn't matter if your reveiew is "late". Thank's for your interest in any case, Nothingness. I'm keeping this story going, along with "The Boy Who Loved Tough Girls." I'll try to post a chapter over the weekend to one or the other. I've neglected my house in order to write, so I'm having to cath up on some chores. "The Boy Who Loved Tough Girls is getting more reads." I prefer this one of the two, myself.
Date: April 22 2017 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Characters
Omg! I had to post that I enjoyed this. I also would love to have this done to me by maybe an exgirlfriend. Maybe a bit of durability so I can get squished good. Great job, loved the plot twists!
Thanks very much master369. These remarks are a real encouragement. I will get the next chapter up when I get a chance.
Date: April 22 2017 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 17: Somewhere In Northern Virginia
Interesting. Wonder where you are going with this?
It won't be long. Yikes, is this the twenty second? Then today is my birthday. I think that's all I'll say on the matter. It snuck up on me. I never has a suspicion.
Date: April 22 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 16: Melissa Rules -- Lisa's Transformation
Ok, here's my question. If Lisa shrinks Helen and then swallows her, won't the shrinking fluid get into her system and cause her to shrink?
Just wondering ,
Hmmmmm, never thought of that. No, it wouldn't, because it was all absorbed into Helen's system and therefore became impotent to use again. It is effectively destroyed in the process of doing its work.
Date: April 22 2017 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 15: Lisa's Terror Continues
Love her peeing. Melissa can be cruel but I think she's fair.
Me, too. Yes, she is cruel. But Dr. Monday really went overboard, and she knows it. Considering her vicious murder of Helen, Melissa is being merciful to her mother.
Date: April 22 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 13: Melissa Views The Video
Such a wonderful story. Melissa's horror at watching the video. I have another thought but I will wait on it. Love your story.
Thanks again for your interest and remarks, diesel. Given Melissa's personality, this is how I think a girl like her would react. I am interested in reading your other thhought, though. By the way, Melissa has a cousin of the same name. Bob Snyder's girlfriend.
Date: April 19 2017 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 9: What the Cleaning Woman Revealed
I like the long winded Maria. Maybe she finds a tiny Helen and takes her home as a pet.
Hmmmm, never thought of that --- maybe a good idea for a future story.
Date: April 17 2017 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 8: Helen is Severely Punished
Great chapter. The only thing I don't like is Melissa saying okay, I won't do that to you anymore. Melissa rules, only she should decide if she wants to do something again.
The stomach was great.
What do you think about Helen answering Melissa with Yes Ma'am to show more respect?
Love your story,
Possibly. The reason for the "Yes Mistress" is that it shows domination of Melissa over Helen. Well, maybe I'll make a change or two. The problem is that all of the chapters are already written. Thanks again for your interest, diesel.
Date: April 16 2017 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 6: Helen's Great Adventure
What a chapter. So love Melissa. Will she leave Helen small? Maybe her maid will find her?
Find out diesel, in the next chapter, which is coming up. Since the story is already written, I can add these chapters at my liesure. I just have to edit them. I love Melissa too.
Date: April 14 2017 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Characters
How did this story get deleted? Very happy to see it back!
I didn't care too much for "The Litle Clone" and "Joyce's Dilemma." Especially since Lisa was out of character inn The Clone. I inadvertently deleted this one also, Fortunately, a copy of "Lisa's Revenge was saved in a back up."