Date: May 27 2017 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Encounter
You're killin' it. Great work here man. Love Audrey's attitude now that she's big. She needs some more shorties to lord it over though. Look forward to more.
That's great feedback. I thought I'd have introduced some new shorties by now, but the writing is really stretching out with the ideas I already had in place. Stay tuned!
Date: March 22 2017 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Encounter
Can't hardly wait for this story's continuation.
I'm looking forward to blending a good growth story ina lightweight, believable sci-fi setting. Can't wait to show off my ideas.