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Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2018 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 10: Power

My old tablet broke too. Stupid thing wouldn't charge for the life of me. I was so pissed. I hope you get yours fix or get a new one. 

 

"Her footprints were visible to all but a blind man, which made her easy to track," 

 

I like that line a lot. A unique way to describe a giantess's footprint. You have a way with describing things cleverly. I found Laeron's assumption about Taegan being ugly was amusing. Sounds like he had his fair share of rumors about the humans.

 

The creature was very chiling. I did not expect it to be a sapient being. I wasn't sure what its intentions were for Teagan especially with how reassuring it had sound one moment and how frustrated in was another, even growling. 

 

This is such a great story and I'm so glad you came back to it.

 

 

 

 



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miss u ;(

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