Date: March 17 2017 11:30 AM Title: CHAPTER I – A New Opportunity
This is a awesome story. I hope Elsa doesn't betray Annie later on in the story. I was also wondering, how come you didn't use the FF/f and FF/m size role tags?
Author's Response:
Tanks! I don't have plans for that happening, so don't worry.
Date: March 10 2017 5:53 PM Title: CHAPTER I – A New Opportunity
Totally overlooked this. Great stuff, fascinating characters and development. I love Annie's ditsy character.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot. I'm having a lot of fun writing this, and trying to be more detalied, without rushing too quicly to the good stuff.
Date: March 09 2017 12:56 AM Title: CHAPTER I – A New Opportunity
I read your other story, which was good. This one is even better. More detailed, scarier.
Date: March 06 2017 12:55 PM Title: CHAPTER I – A New Opportunity
Please consider adding the mother squashing the 5 guys in addition to what your doing? I think it would be great. The feeling of oh we're saved to ewww bugs, squash is a great feeling.
Date: March 05 2017 12:24 AM Title: CHAPTER I – A New Opportunity
Great set up. Where are the boys?Will she figure it out? Hope so.