Date: June 26 2017 4:03 AM Title: Cold Truth
Something I just thought of as well that would be interesting would be Ivory's reaction to what she did to Tanner. How she feels once she calms down, if she thinks she went too far, or maybe she feel some pleasure over the control she imposed. Again, can't wait to see where you take this 😊
Author's Response:
Ivory's character has actually been among the easiest to write ( Ingrid is also easy), in terms of how I want to characterize her and where she'll end up in the long run. Generally speaking I will say one of your guesses are correct in terms of what she thinks of her actions to Tanner.
Date: June 25 2017 6:29 AM Title: Cold Truth
Damn! I mean, I know Ivory loved Tanner and is just tryinh to do what is best for him, but still. He could be scarred for life now, or at the very least subconsciously wary of every person he comes into contact with now. It was a powerful scene, one that will stick with me probably forever which is great, but I feel so bad for Tanner.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the thoughts. I felt it was a bit overdue for me to have a chapter that was more Ivory-centric and expanded on her beyond your average loving mother. Though her actions regarding Tanner usually come from a well meaning place she isn't without her faults. Case in point with her driving the point home of Tanner's limitations in a manner that was pretty excessive.
Date: June 25 2017 12:35 AM Title: Cold Truth
Wow, that was pretty hot. Just the act of placing him at her feet drives home the incredible size difference and how much casual power she has. I feel bad for Tanner as it's quite a humiliating and emasculating experience. But as an outside observer, I enjoyed this chapter. Simple but effective.
Author's Response:
Appreciate the review. It's pretty rare that Tanner has to deal with the whole package of how small he really is, when he's usually in someone's hand, on a table, etc. Ivory really drove that point home, albeit in an insensitive way.