Date: March 04 2017 2:39 PM Title: Drop By
I'm enjoying what I've read so far. There are a few minor mistakes here and there. Nothing bad. I'll wait to rate it when I've read a bit more. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment, more to come soon.
[Report This]Date: March 04 2017 4:12 AM Title: Drop By
This is a good start, I liked Ingrid an the other girls' personalities and I'm also interested on the tags. Looking forward to the next chapters.
Author's Response:
Appreciate the review, I'm trying to have a good blend of personalities to play off of each other. All in good time, I'll get to the tags of the story.
Date: March 03 2017 3:54 PM Title: Drop By
This is great- a great little slice of life piece. Looking forward to seeing more of this!
Author's Response:
Appreciate it, bulk of chapter 3 is already done. But I want to get the rough draft of chapter 4 complete and outline of chapter 5 complete before uploading. Thanks for the comment.
Date: March 03 2017 11:34 AM Title: Drop By
Interesting and well written. I like the premise and if you decide to have Ingrid and Tanner 'play' later on you saved yourself from any incest tags. The foundation as basically set, so I can't wait to see what you build this into.
Author's Response:
Yeah, definitely treading away from any incest territory for any R-rated stuff. There's a little bit more that needs to be set into gear before we get to the meat of things. Thanks for the read and comment.
Author's Response:
Yeah, definitely treading away from any incest territory for any R-rated stuff. There's a little bit more that needs to be set into gear before we get to the meat of things. Thanks for the read and comment.