Wow, I thought that he was going to get to shower w/ her, when they were in the bathroom; that would have been awesome.  Based on the way that you've discribed the other events taking place - I would have liked to experience that...

 ...you're detailing is simply incredible!  And, you know when to back off and let the readers imagination fill in the blanks.  Although, I would like to see a bit more of your own, ...your writing is fantastic!  ;`)