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Reviewer: Bronzehawkz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2020 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a wild ride that was.

Poor Dave, what a depressing end to his life's story... He finally accepted life as Sydney's slave only to soon after have his life snuffed out in a horrible fashion. I love Vanessa making a return at the end, in hindsight, I wonder if Dave would have been better off staying with her. I can't help but wonder what was going through Judy's mind as well, as she watched the shrunken man she saw all that time ago executed like that in front of her, when they were just conversing hours before.

I love this writing style, this long-haul narrative writing of tinies from their perspectives as slaves in a cruel, uncaring world that seems intent on torturing them mercilessly. I've now read all of It's a Sorority Thing (Except for Homecoming, that's next!) and now this, I can't wait to experience more of your stories. You are truly a master at getting me, as the reader, invested in a long narrative, something that's not easy to do with giantess stories.

Reviewer: methodman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2019 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 20

Excellent work

Reviewer: methodman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2019 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 9

Amazing

Reviewer: Megagiant5280 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2018 8:46 PM Title: Epilogue

I got to admit, I lost interest in this story but love the ending and love the return of Vanessa. He should have really stayed with her.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2018 5:36 PM Title: Epilogue

Judy doesn't even get any meaningful screentime in the finale, you jerk!

 

Great to see 'Nessa again though and always good to read another of your stories through to the end.

Reviewer: LilBeni Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 19 2018 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Cool, Current Chapters. I Like To Pretend Dave Is Me, Particularly When Being Toyed With By The God & Goddess Couples, Used As An Anklet Also, And Other Naughty Things!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2018 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 25

Who knew well off teenage girls could be so cruel...everyone who's read you or Jacksmith's stories did but still wonderful to read.

Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2018 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 25

Decent chapter. Nothing too interesting happened, mostly setup for prom but I'm hoping that prom itself is interesting.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2018 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 24

I am curious to see where this all ends for Dave, little guys been on quite the rollercoaster of emotions.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2018 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 23

Now thats what Im talking about! Thats what I was expecting Haley to do when she had them wash up, although I did enjoy that scene too.

 

Hope Sydney plans on using him this way a lot. She seemed to take on a more dominant personality now that she knows he's broken. Love it. 

 

Love this universe! 

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2018 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

Well maybe Haley didn't use him as a toy but Sydney did so can't say this guy has the best luck. I mean most people here would LOVE to be in his position but it's obvious that Dave the character doesn't like what's happening to him. And in real life would this be pleasurable for the tiny man?

I think it would be mostly pain and struggling for breath, I don't think in real life this would be sexy. Anyway, is there ever gonna be a nice person that is immune? I notice that not only are the immune people terrible to tiny people they are just douches in general. Is this inhenrent to the gene that makes them immune?

I'm interested in this universe itself but I recognize that WE the readers are basically limited to whatever bubble Dave finds himself in. So the chances of getting any kind of backstory or world building are slim.

Anyway I do REALLY like this story. Even tho the big people are terrible I haven't yet seen someone I consider EVIL. In other words someone who kills tinies for no reason. So far it's just a bunch of pricks that see tinies as commodities and treat them worse than hamsters.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2018 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 23

Dave fianally broke, good for him.

Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2018 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 22

Pretty good chapter. Despite his fears Haley didn't use him as a toy to get off so that's something good eh?

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2018 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 22

That was unexpected!

Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2018 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 21

I think you accidently added this chapter to the previous one, it's a combination of the two.



Author's Response:

Aye, it should be fixed now (or at least I'm seeing it as fixed).

Reviewer: Weary_Traveler Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2018 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 21

Looks like last chapter got duplicated a bit near the end. Great to see a new chapter so soon :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for pointing that out, not entirely sure what happened but it should be fixed now.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2018 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 21

Every tiny in your universe must be in a living nightmare every moment of their existence.

 

Haley is amazing still.

Reviewer: Weary_Traveler Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2017 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 20

One of the best chapters! Love the dynamic between the characters.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2017 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 20

I thought we'd see a softer, guard lowered version of Haley as the chapter began...she didn't wait long to prove us wrong.

 

Great to see this back.

Reviewer: LilBeni Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 19 2017 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 17

Lovin' the last three chapters, man! Always cool to read & roleplay myself as that diminished, social reject, dominated by sporty, popular teens (particularly couples, together). THANKS

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