Wow, awesome 'Worldbuilding' here! I was completely hooked after that guy Rick, shot his own brother, just to keep him from falling into their clutches, ...awesome. I'll have to go back and read the entire series now!
Found a few little editing errors, but overall not bad. Extremely well written, It's easy to immerse yourself into this world, ...although, I really wouldn't want to! Ha!
Great Stuff Dude! Look forward to more of your adventures! ;`)
Thanks a lot, you cheered me up with your flattering ;) It's reactions I get like this one why I write! See you around man!
I finished it yesterday. Nice cliffhanger and congrats for finishing your story. I get this feeling the Nine Eyes are going to be a bigger threat than the Empire. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Thank you for the nice comment, man. And your gut feeling is correct, the Nine Eyes will be the main protagonist :)
I wasn't sure how you were going to wrap this up because he had the cure in his blood. I like that sinclair is not a mindless evil giantess for the enemy. So far anyway lol
Yeah, lol. But Emanuel doesn't have the cure in his blood. Oliver has it, and that's the other story man
The vore at the end of this chapter was perfect. Love scenes insude the stomach. I hope you detail how they get out, be it being thrown up or pushed out the anus.
Thank you! I agree it should be very detailed. I'll make sure to dedicate an entire chapter to the procedure
I hope Shani gets her memories back in the next and final story of the trilogy.
Me too !
Man i hope Shani doesn't turn
Also are the Nina Eyes gonna be defeated in the next story?
I won't give any spoils about the conclusions and the such, but there will be a form of war and the fate of the Nine Eyes will be concluded there, yes. And in case you're worried about a dark ending for this story: this story actually was written to build up for the third part, so it would be in place. But I can assure you, that as far as dark endings go, this will have the most... 'positive' ending, so to say.
Well he's there and and so is Shani so i thought Shani was gonna turn and eat her own brother.
Well, I wouldn't make assumptions until you've read the entire chapter. In case you got confused, don't worry, he didn't get eaten in this chapter :P
So Shani turns into a giantess and eats her own brother? Dude thats dark.
Wait, where did you get the idea she eats her own brother?
I hope that Shani doesnt turn
I think you may have heard her feelings.
Amanda is finally dead!!
You're bloody welcome!
Im guessing Amanda didnt die from that single missile right?
You'll find out within 6 hours when I upload the next chapter :)
My hatred for the giantess empire increases each time i read a new chapter of your story.
Too bad you can't exchange that hatred in a form of currencie....Imagine the wealth that would lay at your feet
The vore scene with Jo was sexy ;)
I really hope the whole giantess army dies
You might *Might!* get your wish granted to you
I guess this is where the war really begins lol
Hell yeah! Score for the regular size folks!
Oh yeah the Giantesses are fucked now
The giantess empire will burn!
I like the graphical scenes here. Will there be more? :P