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Reviewer: ARush9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2017 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 6: Extended Family Reunion

Jacksmith knocks it out of the park AGAIN..!!!Youare a Macro-writing GOD. Never fails. You are the Michael Jordan of this stuff. I juss got a new account but i've been meaning to tell you for a while. Hope and Pray to Carly Arton you write another "Family Reunion".

 

Fantastic work bruh,keep it rolling.!



Author's Response:

Thank you. In all honesty it will probably be a while before there is a sequel to this one, but I do intend to do one sometime.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2017 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 6: Extended Family Reunion

I Knew it ! I knew who knew it ? ME watch my previous post !!!!!!!!! I knew IT Ok I stop! Sad for Ashley she should have had her revenge but she was so drunk in hate 'n' revenge that she didn't see it coming. the big question is: why did Anna protect Tony from Shrinking powder!?



Author's Response:

You were indeed right. I probably didn't phrase some of the chapter end very well. Anna didn't protect Tony from shrinking, she just didn't hit him as hard as she could have. Ashley and Tony are already small so she just made Ashley's relatives small as well

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2017 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 6: Extended Family Reunion

Once again, great story! I do hope Ashley gets her revenge on Anna eventually though. 



Author's Response:

She's certainly going to want to try!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2017 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 6: Extended Family Reunion

Not expecting that but you do kind of feel Ashley deserves something of a win given her parents pretty much put her in the situation she's in but still a great story none the less.



Author's Response:

Expect the mixed feelings to continue in the finale story of these characters

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