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Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2017 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 5: A Little Bargain

Good chapter!But Something is off... No panic scene from Anna It's just weird. Maybe she know about shrinking liquid but even with that she's too calm. Will the tables turn over again? Please update soon.



Author's Response:

More than one table will turn for these characters eventually

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2017 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 5: A Little Bargain

Great chapter! I do hope Ashley gets some form of revenge, even if it's just getting rid of Alison. 



Author's Response:

We'll find out soon who's going to get their just desserts

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 5: A Little Bargain

This is reaching crime drama levels of tension, I am looking forward to how it plays out.



Author's Response:

We'll see things come to a head next chapter

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