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Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2017 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 4: Payback is a Cousin

Fantastic chapter! I'm glad Ashley is able to get a bit of revenge on Alison. Honestly, i hope Anna shrinks too.



Author's Response:

I won't say what, but there is yet more size-changing coming before the story ends.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2017 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 4: Payback is a Cousin

I understand Ashley's rage, I'm kind of bummed you shrank Ali but it is a Jacksmith story so you roll with the big bads sometimes getting their just desserts...well to be fair Ali wasn't as evil/bad as Carly/Julia in retrospect.

 

Still curious where this all ends up.



Author's Response:

Hehe. I appreciate the trust. Rest assured I'm intending to eventually take these characters to some different places than some of my other big bads have gone.

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