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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2017 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Losing Touch

Not quite what I was expecting but it seems time has softened our Alison a little, great stuff my good man.



Author's Response:

There will be some slightly rougher content in the next chapter

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2017 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: Losing Touch

Interesting interaction. Feels real. The best you can do as a shrunken person is to stay calm and just go with it so that it doesn't bother you anymore and keep yourself sane and rest well.
The only thing that would really bother me is the family and friends that worry about me. For the rest I try to adapt to the situation which is possible if the owners are reasonable.

Interesting is that you see the hardships of both parties, the shrunken and the not-shrunken. For all four there is an uncertain future with danger.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks. And yeah, that's basically where the characters are, just trying to live with one another

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