Date: January 28 2017 10:11 AM Title: Bitch - Formerly Known as Princess
It seems like she's going to shrink him, but we don't actually know whose vagina he's in at the beginning. That could be the aftermath of this encounter, or a future one with another woman. Let's see what it turns out to be.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review Ancient Relic. You are absolutely right. We know Lew winds up small so story becomes how.
[Report This]Date: January 27 2017 10:54 PM Title: Bitch - Formerly Known as Princess
Not sure about where the story is headed. Feel in the dark really. Pei unusual.
I have to say Lew is probably now one of my all time favorite characters in a story. Crazily fleshed out personality. I feel like I know the dude.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I think a character with meat on his bones, good or bad, helps make the story more entertaining. As for where the story is going, we have to cover the ground between where Lew is and the opening lines of the story. Should be fun!
[Report This]Date: January 27 2017 8:24 PM Title: Bitch - Formerly Known as Princess
Hmmmmmm! This has to be the first duel of wits I ever saw where the challenged party was less well-armed than the challenger. And, yet, it still ended in a bigger stalemate than the Korean War.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Is it really a duel when the outcome is almost a certainty the proverbial knife to a gun fight? Though in this case more like bringing a pillow to a nuclear weapons fight.