Reviewer: Sterben Klein Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey hey Kenta :D

 

Sorry for not getting to your story until now. I just read it tonight and I loved the final chapter! I'm a bit sad to see it end, but I'm hoping to see more of your work soon. :D

The scenes in this one were really great. Especially the parts where Mio talked down to Tarou. You portrayed it really nicely and made it immersive to me. :P

I hope you plan on doing more demeaning stuff like that later on. It's nice on occation. I do like the cutesy side as well though, so you have lots of well rounded corners!

The ending to was really nice. I like how all the girls began to fight over him in their own unique ways xD It really made it feel like he was covited amongst them each in their own way, and that for me is a personal favorite.

All and all, you have a really great story, and I hope my review made you happy. Just like I was reading it. :)

 

 

P.S...

I forgot the stars again, but I deleted and tried again. Now you have stars! :P

Author's Response:

Hi hi

Oh no need to be sorry, I'm just glad you read it and enjoyed it, it makes me really happy. And yes, I'm advacing bit by bit on the other story I mentioned, so hopefully I can get it done with a better rhythm than this one, which took me ages to finish...

Is good that you liked those parts, I was insecure about them since it was the first time I wrote something like that. I'm not sure if I'll write some more of it but, going full cutesy all the time could be a bit boring so it could happen. And thanks for the compliment!

I fills me with joy to hear that it ended on a good note. And yes, it makes me really happy so read the reviews so thanks a lot for taking your time so submit one.

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2017 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hey! Congrats on posting your first story. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks! It feels nice to finally have some chapters done.