Reviews For A Bit of Change
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Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2017 5:38 AM Title: Ex's and O's

Definitely your best chapter in this story so far! Loved the long section of butt based tormenting, and a vore death at the end is always nice. Great job.

As for a potential idea for a storyline, I always liked the idea of someone receiving a shrunken person as a gift. Maybe you could do something where someone gets a tiny toy for their birthday? This could maybe also work in Angela story if you want to count Angela's birthday as a holiday.

Second idea that I think would be good is something where there's like a sorority that has an arrangement with the university that they take care of any students who shrink on campus, leaving them at the mercy of drinking games, hazing, etc.

Finally, quick question: Are you on any other sites besides this one? Like Writing.com?

Author's Response:

Appreciate the support, thanks!

I have a chapter in the works that's similar to gifting a tiny, so I think it'll be up your alley. :D The sorority idea I've played with in my head before (was contemplating it for Jeanne), but haven't managed to put it on paper yet. 

and I'm over on Deviantart, same username. 

Reviewer: moarben Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2017 12:16 AM Title: Desk Job (Part One)

i would love to see more of these. they are great. and i would not mind if you continued chapter 2, or even one. hehe



Author's Response:

Chapter 2 will defonitely be continued! I might bring Stephanie back, but not as likely, as I planned to use most characters one or two chapters at most, to keep things moving at a faster pace. Glad you're enjoying it so far!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2017 10:11 PM Title: Desk Job (Part One)

Awesome! Finally, my type of story and very well written. Loved Trish and her treamtment and disregard for the tinies. 

 

This reminds me of The Plague, one of my all time favorites, I'm going to enjoy this!



Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far! I've never read The Plague before, do you happen to know who the author is? It doesn't show up in the site search. :(

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2017 12:28 AM Title: Desk Job (Part One)

Love Lisa. He should have answered her with Yes Ma'am.

Author's Response: Nah, he's gonna answer with "Mmmfff!" by the time she's done with him. ;)

Reviewer: Spitfyre268 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2017 5:47 PM Title: Dance the Night Away

Hey!! Haven't released a story lately! We are all dying to know how Sarah ends!!

Author's Response:

I know, I had to set writing aside for a bit this past few weeks, family emergencies. Good news is, I have another chapter for this almost complete, and I have the final outline for Sara finished. 

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2017 3:45 PM Title: Dance the Night Away

Nice chapter. My idea is someone shrinks in the lab and now they have a specimen. Maybe a 2 inch man and a brunette scientest.

Author's Response:

Hmm... I could play with this idea. Any thoughts on an "experiment" she should perform on him?

Reviewer: romaescipion Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2017 7:29 AM Title: Dance the Night Away

Me ha encatado y sobretodo porque me encantan las mujeres bbw en las historias,enhorabuena y sigue adelante!!!



Author's Response:

¡Gracias! Creo que no hay suficientes buenas historias de bbw aquí, así que decidí añadir a la lista. El autor "nap25" tiene un par de historias maravillosas con bbw, lo recomiendo encarecidamente! Y lo siento, mi español no es muy bueno.

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