[Report This]Date: March 24 2022 1:00 PM Title: Episode 10 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-29-18
One of my favorite stories for sure, such a fun idea and I love the way you write it.
As for suggestions, I was thinking the dynamic between them could end up relaxing after that big climax. Maybe they become friendly about it and he shrinks down intentionally to ride in her shirt for fun or something. Then later on she brings a friend into the mix, a girl her age that Guy knew from before the shrink disease. The two of them bonded years ago, so the friend is eager to see him again, but she doesn't know about his shrinking. Guy is adamant on not letting his shrinking condition be known, so he tries to avoid seeing the friend out of fear that she might too sexy. He locks himself away in his room and then wears blackened sunglasses when he needs to get food. Well Laurissa is mischievous so she ends up tricking Guy into seeing her oblivious friend in beachwear or something, which causes him to shrink right in front of her. For a change of pace maybe the friend is on the thicker side and is overly gentle with him rather than playful.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2019 10:21 AM Title: Episode 10 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-29-18
HOLY FUCKING SHIT! THAT WAS SO HOT! GREAT STORY! O_O
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot, MacroGod, for all your comments! I'm glad you liked it! :)
Date: January 28 2019 2:19 AM Title: Episode 10 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-29-18
This is one of my personal favorites. Of all time. The way how its written just somehow hits every button I have in ways other stories dont. The shifting power dynamic is just excellently executed. I love both of these characters especially the way how Laurissa teases her brother. Its exactly what I'm looking for. There are so many moments in this story where it seems like its going to get cliche but instead becomes something truly fresh and new. The shrinking when arroused is one of my favorite ways to shrink and rut he way how that struggle is presented is just perfectly done. The slow building sexual tension is masterfully paced out so that when something finally happens its absolutely worth it, but only because of the way the wait for it was constructed. I come back to this story often and I really hope the author continues in someway as its just AWESOME!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Rocketmangts! I rarely check out this website nowadays, but I really appreciate your kind comments. Thanks again!
Date: August 30 2018 8:42 AM Title: Episode 10 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-29-18
Yo, this was amazing to read O_O Such a fun read; I'm glad you dont suffer from my inability to finish, haha.
I'd love to talk with you over ideas for seasons 2 and 3, and of course 42 ;P
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for the nice comments. It was really tough to finish this story (6 chapters in 2 episodes). I have other stories I probably will never finish, since I don't feel the need to. I'd rather write new stuff.
Maybe down the road we could chat about ideas... maybe in the comments. That'd be fun.
[Report This]Date: August 29 2018 9:36 PM Title: Episode 10 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-29-18
Damn. What an awesome ending. I had been waiting for that since the start of the story.
Thanks for awesome story. You are amazing for having written it!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the ending... guess it was a good topic for the close of the story. Thanks a lot for the nice comments and thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: August 29 2018 2:02 PM Title: Episode 10 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-29-18
You have got to make sequels to this. One of the best new stories I’ve read in the past 5 years. Please continue this!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for all the comments you've done. I appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: August 29 2018 11:31 AM Title: Episode 10 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-29-18
A great "ending" for this great story ! Thank you !
Nota : "Little Snatcher" is a very good GTS game too !
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks a lot for commenting and reading. And thanks for the game suggestion.