Date: April 08 2018 5:01 PM Title: Ep 6 Ch 3
I'll admit I'm interested by how we can follow Laurissa's descent (or ascent) into a torturous villain addicted to her power over her brother. I'm curious to see how Guy gets out of the trap his sister has laid this time. But I'm curious what would happen to Laurissa if she decided to take some of Guy's medicine instead of throwing it away. (Unsubtle suggestion is unsubtle) But with how addicted to her control over Guy she is I'm curious how she'd react if Guy's fracturing mind caused him to take, let's say, BIG, and drastic action. Holding the one thing that Laurissa cares more about than her brother hostage. (See previous parenthese comment)
But I'm just a person on the internet with an opinion. God knows we don't need any more of those.
Keep up the good work,
Sincerely,
A reader.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for commenting. I do see the appeal of Laurissa becoming a real gts. I find it arousing, though it’s something I’d only do after writing a ton of shrinking chapters… therefore it probably won’t happen. I’d like to do it, though. Also there’s the problem of everyone in the city seeing her as a gts… but I could figure out a way to resolve that, I guess. For now, I possibly, *maybe* could put extra emphasis on the gts-theme while Guy is shrunk… like a toy city or something. Of course, I need to find the motivation to write. At least I’m posting episode 7 now. Thanks again for your thoughts. I appreciate it.