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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2019 8:08 PM Title: Episode 6 Chapter 1 ... 2-2-18

Oh shit... I've got a bad feeling about this.. O_O lol

Reviewer: George1000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2018 8:33 AM Title: Episode 6 Chapter 1 ... 2-2-18

I wish a chapter in which Laurie shrink her brother and put into her panties and go out her girl friends in city. 



Author's Response:

Sounds like a fun idea.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2018 7:04 AM Title: Episode 6 Chapter 1 ... 2-2-18

Love it

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot.

Reviewer: Lily Iris Sugarfrost Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 03 2018 8:02 PM Title: Episode 6 Chapter 1 ... 2-2-18

MY FAV STORY IS BACK, SCREAMS

I'm happy you're back Jedi! And I missed Laurie too hhh, I can't wait, you know how I am about mouth stuff.

You stopped emailing me btw, I sent you a few but you never responded- I hope you're going okay!

Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting, Lily.  There's been an email mix up.  I sent one January 2nd saying that I had some personal problems I needed to focus on and so couldn't email anymore.  I'm super sorry that I didn't follow up to see if you had received that email (which you never got)  I'm SUPER SORRY about that.  The email I was using is a beta, so it doesn't work well.  Sometimes I can't even log in for several minutes.  And it doesn't send/receive messages consisitently.

I'm glad you let me know you didn't receive the message from Jan. 2nd.  I'm not emailing right now due to personal stuff, but maybe several months from now.  Until then I'm posting a couple chapters.  I think you're awesome, Lily.  It was not my intention for you to not receive the email.  I'm extremely SUPER SORRY that happened.

Reviewer: YellowBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2018 6:22 PM Title: Episode 6 Chapter 1 ... 2-2-18

The master is back!



Author's Response:

You are very kind.  Thanks for reading/commenting.

Reviewer: mirmo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2018 11:29 PM Title: Episode 6 Chapter 1 ... 2-2-18

Very good story, thank you :D



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2018 3:56 PM Title: Episode 6 Chapter 1 ... 2-2-18

Great chapter. Your story is well structured, love the build up and execution. Love the charachter setup and development. How ever in this chapter I noticed a mistake. You have a gift, please keep writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice comments.  I appreciate it.

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