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Reviewer: DanceDance1982 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2018 11:37 AM Title: Introduction

Your story is incredible! I love the build up and amazing detail you put into your writing. Please have a look at my challenge! It’s inspired by this story and might be something you could build upon in future.

Reviewer: Pvgs16 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2018 11:26 AM Title: Introduction

Another great chapter in an incredible story. Maybe season 2 could be Laurie abandoning the rules and making guy tiny permanently.  



Author's Response:

Interesting suggestion.  Thanks a lot for reading... and thanks for all your comments.

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2018 2:12 AM Title: Introduction

Thank you very much for finishing. I'd like to see season two, but I'm just happy you finished this. Great writing, and good slow buildup



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the nice comments... and thanks for all your comments. 

Reviewer: sm7in Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2018 8:43 AM Title: Introduction

Forgot the stars!

Message me if you're keen, thats a thing on here, right?



Author's Response:

*takes the stars*

Thanks a lot for reading/commenting.  And thanks for the inspiration.  I won't be using the site for a long while, but maybe we could share ideas eventually.  I don't think the message system works with my account--for whatever reason.  Using the comments is probably better... though I won't be checking for a long time to let you know.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: sm7in Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2018 8:42 AM Title: Episode 10 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-29-18

Yo, this was amazing to read O_O Such a fun read; I'm glad you dont suffer from my inability to finish, haha.

I'd love to talk with you over ideas for seasons 2 and 3, and of course 42 ;P



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the nice comments.  It was really tough to finish this story (6 chapters in 2 episodes).  I have other stories I probably will never finish, since I don't feel the need to.  I'd rather write new stuff.

Maybe down the road we could chat about ideas... maybe in the comments.  That'd be fun.

Reviewer: Layston Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2018 9:36 PM Title: Episode 10 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-29-18

Damn. What an awesome ending. I had been waiting for that since the start of the story.

 

Thanks for awesome story. You are amazing for having written it!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the ending... guess it was a good topic for the close of the story.  Thanks a lot for the nice comments and thanks for reading.

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2018 2:02 PM Title: Episode 10 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-29-18

You have got to make sequels to this. One of the best new stories I’ve read in the past 5 years. Please continue this!!!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks for all the comments you've done.  I appreciate it.

Reviewer: mirmo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2018 11:31 AM Title: Episode 10 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-29-18

A great "ending" for this great story ! Thank you !

Nota : "Little Snatcher" is a very good GTS game too !



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks a lot for commenting and reading.  And thanks for the game suggestion.

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2018 7:10 PM Title: Episode 9 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-24-18

Guy surrendering to teen goddess Laurissa and touching himself with her permission while she watched was divine. She must had adored so much, seeing how desperately horny he was, he couldn't resist.



Author's Response:

That was one of the fun, sexy parts.  Thanks a lot for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Layston Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2018 9:17 PM Title: Episode 9 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-24-18

This has been a great story. Thank you for sharong it with us!

I can't wait for the finale!



Author's Response:

Posting the next part now.  Thanks for taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: Marcarth Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2018 5:39 PM Title: Introduction

For the most part I love this story, there's good pacing and balancing and I like how each episode starts and ends in a similar way

If I did have a gripe it's that lauriesse's (was that her name?) character started to get on my nerves, and I was honestly hoping Guy would just punch her and end it.

But yeah, overall I liked it



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/commenting.  I'm glad you liked the story overall.

Reviewer: ElSun Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2018 3:55 PM Title: Episode 9 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-24-18

I really enjoyed the story so far, looking forward to how it ends!



Author's Response:

Posting the next part really soon.  Thanks for leaving a comment.

Reviewer: fanofff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2018 3:45 PM Title: Introduction

this is my first review but i feel i HAVE to leave my thoughts on this masterpiece of fetish work

do not ever ever EVER delete this story it is one of if not THE best i've read on this site

the pacing the descriptive words the amazing balance between story and "action" it's a story that i read in whole no skipping to the "good" parts as everything ties in so well

the last chapter of season one will be coming soon so i know it's too late but..may i throw some directions or plot points to incorporate in later chapters?

1: at some point Laurissa drinks Guy's medicine resulting in her actually becoming taller and resulting in

2: her breasts gradually increasing in size and some "unfortunate" side effects..one being heavy lactation..which "requires" Guy's help (maybe the milk can affect him or she can use it to her advantage

 

either way thank you for writing this (and 3 stepsisters anger) and keep up the awesome work!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your nice comments.  It makes me happy that you enjoyed the story.  And I appreciate the suggestions.... as it's fun to brainstorm ideas.  I've fantasized about similar ideas.  Thanks again.

Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2018 1:12 PM Title: Introduction

I've absolutely loved every single chapter in this story. So sad it's about to come to an end. Like so many others, I'd love to be in his position, especially since his sister likes to dominate him, but isn't out to end his life. Makes a great change in a lot of stories,tbh. Also, just got to say, that from the very beginning, I've always imagined his sister to be like Natalie Alyn Lind from Gifted. Just an incredibly beautiful young lady. Thanks for the story. Great job. 



Author's Response:

I really appreciiate the comments.  I like the show gifted, and Natalie is hot.  Thanks for reading/commenting.

Reviewer: DollSize Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2018 11:16 AM Title: Episode 9 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-24-18

Spectacular

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot.

Reviewer: mirmo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2018 9:21 AM Title: Episode 9 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-24-18

Your story is so good ! I can't waiting for the 10th episode !



Author's Response:

Glad you like it so far.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Ronaldinho10 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2018 7:05 PM Title: Episode 8 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-3-18

Hey! Great story. I was thinking about other family members visiting him for a while like his aunt or his grandmother ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and thanks for the suggestion.

Reviewer: mirmo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2018 1:35 PM Title: Episode 8 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-3-18

Very good episode ! I love your story and your imagination ! 



Author's Response:

It makes me happy you like the fantasies that I do.  Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2018 11:43 AM Title: Episode 8 Chapters 1-3 ... 8-3-18

Little sister's teasing and seduction are of the highest level in existence. :O Poor brother.



Author's Response:

I appreciate your nice comments.  Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: Mr I Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2018 3:32 PM Title: Introduction

Amazing! Please continue story.

Author's Response:

Glad you like the story.  Thanks for taking the time to read/comment.

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