Date: April 08 2018 5:01 PM Title: Ep 6 Ch 3
I'll admit I'm interested by how we can follow Laurissa's descent (or ascent) into a torturous villain addicted to her power over her brother. I'm curious to see how Guy gets out of the trap his sister has laid this time. But I'm curious what would happen to Laurissa if she decided to take some of Guy's medicine instead of throwing it away. (Unsubtle suggestion is unsubtle) But with how addicted to her control over Guy she is I'm curious how she'd react if Guy's fracturing mind caused him to take, let's say, BIG, and drastic action. Holding the one thing that Laurissa cares more about than her brother hostage. (See previous parenthese comment)
But I'm just a person on the internet with an opinion. God knows we don't need any more of those.
Keep up the good work,
Date: February 03 2018 8:02 PM Title: Episode 6 Chapter 1 ... 2-2-18
MY FAV STORY IS BACK, SCREAMS
I'm happy you're back Jedi! And I missed Laurie too hhh, I can't wait, you know how I am about mouth stuff.
You stopped emailing me btw, I sent you a few but you never responded- I hope you're going okay!
Thank you for commenting, Lily. There's been an email mix up. I sent one January 2nd saying that I had some personal problems I needed to focus on and so couldn't email anymore. I'm super sorry that I didn't follow up to see if you had received that email (which you never got) I'm SUPER SORRY about that. The email I was using is a beta, so it doesn't work well. Sometimes I can't even log in for several minutes. And it doesn't send/receive messages consisitently.
I'm glad you let me know you didn't receive the message from Jan. 2nd. I'm not emailing right now due to personal stuff, but maybe several months from now. Until then I'm posting a couple chapters. I think you're awesome, Lily. It was not my intention for you to not receive the email. I'm extremely SUPER SORRY that happened.
Date: February 02 2018 3:56 PM Title: Episode 6 Chapter 1 ... 2-2-18
Great chapter. Your story is well structured, love the build up and execution. Love the charachter setup and development. How ever in this chapter I noticed a mistake. You have a gift, please keep writing.
Thanks for the nice comments. I appreciate it.
Date: February 02 2018 3:09 PM Title: Introduction
just to screw with him more laurie could put the protagonist into unwaware situations with his mom as she does stuff to him without realising.
Interesting idea. Thanks for reading/commenting.
Date: November 28 2017 5:29 AM Title: Ep 5 Ch 3
One of the best stories and concepts to hit this site for ages, and I must confess I've regularly checked to see if the pause has come to an end! HUGE fan of this.
Do you think you'll be un-pausing anytime soon...?
Either way, fantastic stuff. The suspense is killing me!
I should have used a different word than "pause." Sorry about that.
Thanks for reading and also for your nice comments. Posting another chapter now.
Date: November 05 2017 4:22 PM Title: Introduction
I thought of an ending to the story. You could technically write it up as two different endings if you wanted to. You could either have him succumb to his sisters beauty and constant sexual plays OR have him defeat her advances. Thus, helping him finally control himself while being around other women. :-)
Indeed. Not sure which direction. Thanks for reading!
Date: September 11 2017 6:02 PM Title: Ep 5 Ch 3
Yo I love this story pls keep writing it is amazing thank you love your story's you need to finish that other story its like this one I love that one two I don't now how many times I commented on this story I love
Thanks for reading/commenting. I'm not sure when/if I'll continue this.
Date: September 02 2017 2:17 AM Title: Ep 5 Ch 3
“Imagine the possibilities.” Then leave this story on a cliffhanger while you take a break. Nice timing. The story was pretty hot, and I liked the chapter endings.
Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.