Date: January 15 2017 1:46 AM Title: Thanksgiving
I love this story! Your descriptions and dialogue are fantastic and you do a good job building the relationship between the main characters. The interaction is great too. That opening chapter with Shaun feeding his giant girlfriend was incredibly hot and I enjoyed all the Thanksgiving shenanigans. Really great stuff.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you love it! Shaun feeding her was a fantasy rolling around in my head, trying to do something nice for a loved one yet being so close to danger like that. Like that one scene in 'The Adventures of Baron von Munschausen,' where he gives that giantess the flower she catches in her mouth. I've never forgotten that. Anyway! I'm gratified you're enjoying the series, Shaun and Janine are very fun to write about.
[Report This]Date: January 14 2017 11:54 PM Title: Thanksgiving
The perils of smallness. Aborigen, I'm not sure how you do it. Everything is so vivid. So well defined and described. You are a talented writer, my friend, and that was an absolute treat to enjoy. Love this piece so much.
Author's Response:
Thank you very kindly. I hadn't planned this to become a series, I'd just knocked out an old fantasy I couldn't get out of my head. Then I wrote a similar story and realized I liked the characters, and the rest spun out of control. I'm relieved to hear positive responses after going in a different direction from X-rated ravishing scenes, tells me there's room for everybody and everything in this genre. Thank you for your thoughtful support.