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Reviewer: randomwierdness Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2018 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 26

I wanna punch Jason lol. This is a good story!!



Author's Response: Oh I think we all want to punch Jason. Thanks!

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2018 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 26

Great stuff. I'm on the edge on my seat here, it seems like everyone has it out for poor Tor, no wonder she's such a stick in the mud, lol.

I will say something tho. Sometimes I forget this is a giantess story. It's probably the subject matter and there not being much size difference interaction but I think it's also the sort of non-chalant way things are "shown" if you get what I mean. Probably a writing style thing; most stories here make it a point even if there isn't any direct interaction between tiny/giant to write the scenes so certain camera or point of view descriptions remind the reader of the size thing... Anyway I'm still here along for the ride, just wanted to point out something i'd noticed.



Author's Response:

I understand. And probably when I go do editing, I'll include more things from Eric's point of view. However, it is difficult to get in his mind so to speak. He's such a ... weak character compared to Tor. He doesn't talk much. He's like that fat, lazy house cat that never does anything but is just *there.*

I will say this, in the sequal I have planned, he will be much more vocal...for reasons. :D I thank you so much from the bottom of my heart for reviewing and sticking with my story! Much love. <3 <3

 

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