[Report This]Date: March 28 2017 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
"My people are peaceful". Proceeds to allow a massive stallion to bite people. Not that they did anything to deserve her anger like her brothers. Also assails her twin, her only good brother thus far. And placed Eric in her mouth, him knowing she has killed about a dozen people in a month with it.
I think that little joke Tor pulled was good for Eric, however. He needs to keep himself grounded. Her male protection, how pompous. He has to understand what he is now, and consider it.
I do hope Tor gives Eric a good view of the brawl.
Author's Response:
To be fair, she did warn everyone except her brothers' stablehands. And she sees them, rightly or wrongly, as accomplices to their attempt at getting rid of her. As for teasing Eric, there will be more to come. ;) I've got some ideas I'll be employing. She'll give some things and others will do things and you will enjoy it all, I'm sure.
And Tor won't physically fight her brothers. They're too big for her to do so, she's learned. So she'll use Idiot as a sheild/weapon and let his bad temper do all the work.
Thanks for your review! I always look forward to your thoughts.
Date: March 28 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
I like these chapters where we get little peaks into Eric's mind and history! It's good to see he's starting to admit he enjoys his place as Tor's pet, even if he's still fighting it!
Also, I had assumed he wanted to be Tor's "friend" as a sort of power/pride-thing, but seeing he's never had a friend adds a bit of tragedy to that insistence.
Although I usually like to ask lots of silly questions, I really need to go to bed now - So just know you're doing a really good job and your skill and dedication is really appreciated! :)
[Report This]Date: March 28 2017 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
Eric felt like he had achieved some sort of grand thing by not letting the giant man get any closer to Tor.
Mmmh. I think Eric could have been slightly more grateful to the person who saved his "precious friend' from drowning. Not even a single word of thanks.
After what felt like an eternity, she pulled him out. His hair was soaked; saliva dripped from his face. He was pale and shaking, she noticed.
Kind of sad she didn't take the play further :(
Well I look forward to what she has in store for the other brothers... and their slave human pets :)
Good luck on your job fair and date :)
Author's Response:
She may yet play more with him in the future. ;) As for Eric, he seems a bit ungrateful doesn't he? Such a stinker... Thank you for your continued love of my story. :D
Date: March 28 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
Nice chapter! Good to see Tor lightened up a bit, although her "light" mood might be more dangerous for Eric methinks. Anyway, good luck on your job fair and date!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I always appreciate reviews and well-wishes. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.