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Reviewer: tingle01 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2017 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 16

Thanks for the chapter! Thought you had dropped the story. 

Honestly to see someone acting so tough unable to swim... is slightly ridiculous ^^ but yeah yeah I get it, her difficult childhood's to blame. Looks like her hate for her brothers is justified... 

Also Eric won't just acknowledge he's lucky with Tor and shut up will he? He keeps bragging to other tinies about his relationship with her. Apart from shocking them or making them envious, what good could it possibly do? Well Eric's not the considerate type, and just a teenager after all. 

Will we have more interaction between Tor and new tinies for the rest of their adventure? I'd love to see more of this.. But it's up to you^^

Btw #taxationIsHowSocietyRunsHoweverUnfair

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughts! And yeah, it is a bit comical to see someone so tough unable to swim. That's why I included that in there, for some comic relief. As for Eric... he might think that he can be a hero and free all enslaved humans. We did see a hero complex earlier with the free humans that Tor saved from being eaten, remember? But he's just a teenager, so what does he know of being a hero and saving people? Lol Yes! Tor will interact with more humans. That bit of fun is far from over. ;) Thanks for your time and interest in my story. It's always appreciated.

Reviewer: Intheliar Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 15 2017 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 16

Whew, that was quite a wait for Ch 16! I understand life can make things difficult someti--... frequently. But I'm glad you are well and gave us another update!

I enjoy the way the story is going. And I like how protective Tor is of her princeling, he is surely lucky to have a friend like her taking care of him. She makes sure he's always taken care of, but never lets things get too mushy-- whether it be her ignoring him, eating other humans, etc.

There's always that subtle nagging feeling, that they are not equals, but at the same time, that maybe it doesn't matter that much. I like gentle gts fictions mainly. But other stories make the characters TOO equal sometimes and the thrill of being intimidated is effectively pushed to the back burner. Being reminded of the difference in power, the sheer futility of resistance, and the grace of being spared by such a being, that's what tickles my fancy, for lack of a better term.

I've prattle on long enough. #No taxation without respresentation



Author's Response:

Life can be such a bummer sometimes. But writing is theraputic. ;)

As for Tor, she is very protective of Eric. We'll delve into the "why" of that a little later. And she's not a mushy-gushy sort of woman. She shows her affection in other ways. And no, they're not equals. They probably never will be in Tor's eyes, but she isn't going to treat Eric like shit just because (in her mind) she's better than him. He hasn't pissed her off, so she won't be a bitch to him haha. There is a lot more interactions between them to come. Thanks for sticking around!

Reviewer: mullac Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2017 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh thank god - I thought you'd died!

I liked this chapter! It may have been short, but between the little revelations about Tor's upbringing and the boob adventure, it was certainly worth the wait!

Very interesting to hear from a human that not only accepts their place as an Elder's pet, but relishes in it! I wonder if June's other pets might feel the same way though.

I know how annoying it is when your characters don't do as they're told. You gotta give them tough love - remind them that you can destroy them just as easily as you created them!

Also #CorporateProfitingFromTheMeansOfProductionIsTheft ! ;)



Author's Response:

See, that's the thing, Tor would rather have been destroyed than to have her flaws shown to the world. So that didn't work. And Eric held out until I promised him he wouldn't die and was going to get a surprise. Now he's huffy that he didn't get to personally know the human girl. xD Thanks for your review. It's always much appreciated.

As for my disappearance, I had to do a lot of adulting, then got sick this past weekend (don't trust shrimp from a very-much-inland Mexican restaurant!), took care of personal business. and now it's Spring Break for me. I plan to get at least one more chapter out this week, in the midst of applying for new jobs. Thanks for your patience!

Reviewer: greaterthan3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2017 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 16

Tor's childhood sounds like it was really fucked... It's a shame Eric wasn't able to hear what she confessed to the man who pulled her from the river. That sounds like something that they could build their relationship on a bit more. It's always nice when Tor sincerely opens up to Eric.

I'll be honest the begining of ch14 had some of my favorite writing, I've got a think for giant breasts, after all why are we all here. And there's a reference to her making Eric orgasm..? I don't remember that.

I really do hope she winds up looking past him being a human and falls in love with him. Screw finding her brothers who are obviously terrible people, just go on your own and be happy together :(

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I am glad you are liking my story. There will be more breasts in the future. And even other fun tags. ;) Keep reading to find out.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2017 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 16

"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to crush a man's toes because he offended her. 

Tor had a rough childhood it would seem. No wonder she's so abrasive. Most bullies grow up in environments where they are usually bullied by either their parents or their siblings. I guess Tor fits that description. It doesn't even begin to excuse her reprehensible actions, but it contextualizes it.

Eric just assumed every man is heterosexual. Yeah, that's not a thing. He's also in denial about being owned. I don't think he can even think that he traded one oppressor for another. But this one has big tits and is a giantess, so that is certainly preferable.

#taxationisneccesary



Author's Response: Yes, Tor's childhood was very rough, indeed. And no, it doesn't excuse her actions in the least. But now itheyre not out of the blue, so to speak. And Eric is very much in denial. His current "oppressor" is physically preferable to the last, and so is the attitude, in his opinion. He doesn't see Tor as an oppressor, though, so that makes a world of difference to him. As always, thanks for your review! I look forward to yours every time.

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