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Reviewer: mullac Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2017 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 15

All hands on deck! The Aww-factor is reaching critical levels!

In all seriousness, I was surprised and excited to see you managed to crank out a chapter today! I'm totally jealous of your writing abilities!

Interesting to see two new Elders - who I assume will be recuring for the next chapter or more! I think these are the first attractive Elders other than Tor we've seen too! The conflicts they've presented sound like they could be taken in dangerous and sexy directions (or both!)

Also, I'm interested to know why Tor specifies that's a no-go area for humans (I mean, I can guess, but I'm interested in if I've guessed correctly!)



Author's Response:

That's an area for Elders only. As of right now, she is not sexually attracted to Eric. Now that may or may not change in the future. No spoilers from me. ;)

Thanks for the compliment on my writing abilities! It helps that I'm focusing all my spare attention (outside of work and grading) on this. I put all my other stories on the backburner. I really want to finish this one. Next week's chapter will be a lot of fun. I can guarantee that! I have an old friend and writing partner that has started pitching me ideas for this book. And some of the ones she's coming up with have me in stitches. And possibly characters from the book. ;) I'm going to spend the weekend with her next weekend, so there may even be more than one chapter. But no promises!

As always, thanks a million for being such a faithful reader and reviewer! I always appreciate it and look forward to the comments from my dedicated fans.

Reviewer: tingle01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2017 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thanks for the chapter. 

It was so cute when Eric kissed Tor on the neck. Though I would've expected him to say "it was for everything" rather than "I don't really know". 

"that's off limit to humans" I wonder how long this is going to last :)  

June looks interesting... And judging from her way of speaking, I suppose she's used to eating humans? 

 

 

By the way, I know this is not feedback, but I have to say this : I hate roommates inconsiderate of others, exactly like June haha. 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

All will be revealed in due time! And Eric only *thinks* he's suave and debonnaire and great with words. He's really not. ;) Haha Thanks for the review! Always appreciated.

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2017 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 15

Very interested in Auntie June and perhaps he'll finally get a little action...

Author's Response: Who knows what that voluptuous woman has in mind for our Eric. ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2017 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 15

"My people are peaceful." Almost every Elder up until this point has expressed the desire to eat a human. June isn't what I'd call an opposite. She is far more gregarious, true, but still kind of wants to murder a human on sight by eating them. 

I don't understand what people see in Tor. She's kind of a cunt. I mean she's killed almost a dozen people in a month or so pretty brutally. She's also on a mission to kill her brothers. Why people like tsundere's is beyond me...

Tor gets sea sick? I wonder if she'll barf up anyone.

Bret has some GUTS to talk to Tor like that. He's the first person to do so successfully. Keep in mind a lot of women would have slapped him, but Tor leaves him be, whilst earlier she murdered a doctor for muttering under his breath. That seems fair.

So how does crime actually work in this country? Is there a limit to how humans are pets? Do people just look away from the stuff Tor has done? I mean, a hanging one thing, leaving a path of death like Tor is another. She is hot though, so I'm sure a jury would be willing to look past some stuff.



Author's Response: People don't know that Tor has eaten humans. It's not exactly obvious and she's not crowing about it. But most people would find eating humans to be abhorrent and disturbing. The whole "human pets" thing is going to be explained soon but there are rules to it. As for Bret, he's 6'2" and Tor is 5'8". There's a height/size disparity that she has learned not to get physically aggressive with. Her brothers aren't exactly angels and gentlemen. Thanks for your review! I always look forward to your perspective. It's refreshing and needed.

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