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Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2018 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 24

Nice! I'm glad that you have this finished ahead of time.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2018 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 23

When the lurkmeister updated his story for the first time in two years, I immediately thought about this story because it's such a good story and also hadn't been updated in a long time. Good to see that you are ok and that the writing life force hasn't been sucked out of you!

Also good to hear that you have a nice place and a better job. I'm assuming you are a native English speaker/teacher (I'm not, so I'll compare to how my native language teacher was viewed), so comparing that to my experience students can already have a prejudice that you suck before you have done something that deserves it/without resonr. I hope your new job will be much better.

And also, I'm forgetting to say something about the story itself. Tor buying the piece of land for Eric's benefit was kind of heart warming, but the beating up part for nice clothes A bit less. Was it inspired by your last job ;)

Thanks for writing! Good to see you back!

Reviewer: Swoonerson Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2018 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey, so I MADE an acount on this site JUST to leave a review to encourage you. This story is amazing. The characters are likeablle and compelling and I just cant get enough. I'm terrified to think such a good story could be left to die. Please keep writing. Reading each chapter felt like a gift. 

Author's Response: I知 flattered you made an account just to review my work! I am trying to write. This story isn稚 dead! I just have a whole, whole lot going on right now. I知 starting a new job, unpacking from a move, training a puppy... So much. So don稚 be terrified! Maybe soon I値l get an update out. :)

Reviewer: Loralye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2018 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 22

I hope Tor will share her feelings with Eric, even if it isn’t a lot. Just small gestures that prove she does care, more than just as an owner. Awesome story though, hope you update soon

Author's Response: I am currently working on the next chapter! I知 a teacher, tho, so that slows everything down quite a bit until the end of May. But hopefully the next one will be up soon! I知 glad you enjoy my little project. ^.^

Reviewer: bobbyman910 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2018 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am really enjoying this story and am just wondering if there will be any new chapters soon. Thanks and keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Fluffer Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2017 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Everything is all good except for a couple spelling errors here and there, but for the most part is pretty damn good. It is also very nice to read one of my favorite stories continued. I like how you make the family distinction and discrimination markedly obvious even a blind person could see it. The major spelling error I noticed was "hearsay." While yes, it's how it is said it is heresay. Nice job still. Keep it up please.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am so glad to see you are enjoying it. I am actively working on the story. I just have a very busy life. More to come soon!

Reviewer: mullac Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2017 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 22

YAAAAY! You're back! 

I enjoyed this chapter! It may be short, but you really made up for it with lots of character development! Though I'm very nervous for both Princeling and Tor's safety now - her brothers could easily gang up on her!

I gotta disagree with vgiv, I think that Princeling's character development is, after growing up in a castle all his life with everything he could have ever wanted, he's realising that he's just a teeny tiny little boy in a world bigger than his ego.

Really looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yes! I'm back. For the next few weeks until I start teaching again. ;) I'm so pleased you liked the chapter! I know it was short so I'm happy you think the character development made up for it. I'll be working on chapter 23 today. I'm going to try and get the story moving forward again. Plot-wise anyway. So happy you enjoyed the story! It's always a win in my book.

Reviewer: tinykev49 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 22

Good chapter, next one soon?

Author's Response: I'll be working on it today! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Fluffer Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2017 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Everything is all good except for a couple spelling errors here and there, but for the most part is pretty damn good. It is also very nice to read one of my favorite stories continued. I like how you make the family distinction and discrimination markedly obvious even a blind person could see it. The major spelling error I noticed was "hearsay." While yes, it's how it is said it is heresay. Nice job still. Keep it up please.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2017 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 22

Gotta admit, and no offense intended, kinda short for the wait.

I don't think Jason comprehends that his sister has business sense he just lacks. It doesn't matter how she sealed the deal, what matters is that his stubborn, violent and immature personality insure that he won't be very successful. He's a small fry, he can't bully his way to the top like he thinks he can.

I also feel Eric is a kind of an anchor for Tor. He snags on everything, forcing her to move slower. Unlike Tor, Eric has not gone through a lot of character development. She's become far less antagonistic and slightly less bullish, at least towards him. Eric by comparison is still the spoiled and naive boy he was at the start of the trip.

This makes his fealty to Tor even more apparent. He is completley reliant on her for everything, food, protection, shelter, companionship, and knowledge. He hasn't a shred of independence or capability. Sooner or later, Eric will have to come to terms with his own powerlessness. And with Jason fully aware of him being a weakness he can exploit, it won't be pretty.


Author's Response:

I know it was short, but I wanted to get this out and get rolling/writing again. Plus, I have literally nothing to do for the next two weeks. Literally. Except vacuuming the house. I'm a teacher on summer break! I'll get more chapters out a little faster. Hopefully a couple each week. I am so delighted to see you sticking with me and my little diamond-in-the-rough of a story.

As for my characters, Jason is an overconfident ass. That is without a doubt. So I'm so glad he came across that way!

Yes, Eric is definitely Tor's anchor. He is slowly working a change on her without even realizing it. But yet he is still spoiled and naive. He has a ways to go to become a fully-functional adult.

Tor is Torani, much to her chagrin. She hates her name, which is why she goes by Tor. She thinks it sounds better. Truth be told, the day I came up with her name, I was bathing a dog at my first job (vet's office). I wiped my face on my shoulder, looked down and saw the name of the Torani coffee syrup brand on my shirt. And boom! There came Torani Keller. lol

Thanks again for your steadfast support and review!

Reviewer: Charmer Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2017 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 21

As great as always CoalWhite! I liked the last part. And Eric getting beaten by a little girl, that part got me laughing. Just how unfit was he? Haha, hope you update soon. Have a good day.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 21

"My people are peaceful." A female Elder rapes a female human, and Bret's younger sibling used a human to make up for smallcock. Keep in mind, Elders are totally ok with slavery. 

Eric getting beaten up by a little girl... flashbacks of Arya and Joffrey...

Eric is in denial, and its so obvious Delicate isn't too far off with her conclusions. You can't really blame her for not believing Eric. What Prince would ever be found with an Elder? Do Elders even have a noble class? Eric could have chosen his words more wisley. And he's had this coming.

I wonder of he'll ever be honest with himself? I think he'll only understand if Tor herself said as much.

Author's Response:

I missed you! So glad to see your review. And it was Larson, not Sawyer, who used a human to compensate. Larson is Tor's top-hand. As for Elders having a noble class, not really. There is a central government, but it isn't open daily like ours is. And it's mostly comprised of elected representatives from the local provinces/towns when it does open/convene.

Eric may never come out of his denial, but we'll just see! There is more to this story that has yet to be written. ;)

Thanks again for your review. I always am excited to see your thoughts brought to the table.

Reviewer: mullac Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 21

I'd have loved to know Larson when he was younger - filling out a guy's bulge sounds like a fun way to spend a day!

And ooh yay! More sex scenes! I had feared that last chapter would be the only explicit thing we'd get for a while at least, I'm happy to be proven wrong!

Author's Response: Haha!! You're welcome. As for knowing Larson... maybe that could be arranged through an RP. ;)

Reviewer: tinykev49 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved the sex scene with the tinies!! Please more of that!!! :)

Author's Response:

There will be more! Promise. ;) I'm going to fill out all the tags I've got on the front page. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2017 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 20

Eh, I won't read male Giant content. It's just... very, very off putting to me. I'll allow others to judge.

Awww, Eric's actually in love I think. I thought he tolerated Tor's behavior because of some misplaced sense of freedom. It would appear he truly has feelings for her. Whether or not it's just for her looks is yet to be fult seen.

I think Tor does have a measure of affecfion fof Eric, not to the point Id call it love. But I coukd see her kissing him, but never out of true love or anything like that. I don't know if there is a word to describe what she feels. But then again, she has killed for him.

Author's Response: Not everyone's taste runs the same as mine. So I have no problems with you not reading that section of content. There will be solely female smut scenes in the future. Eric's affection for Tor is genuine, as is hers for him, even if there aren't any clear labels for what they're feeling. I'm glad you reviewed! I had begun to fear I lost you! Haha Thanks as always. <3

Reviewer: mullac Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2017 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 20

"Aaw yeah! The description says sexy stuff! At last!"

*First scene is a castration*  

"You motherfu-"


> She wished there was a way to capture the moment. But she did not have an artistic bone in her body. Any attempt she might make to draw the scene would have been futile.  

I see what you did there. I see you. That image is pretty cute though, so I may just give it a go if you really want ;)


And oh my Gawd that sex scene! I have no idea where to start! Which part to draw? I may just do a series of drawings for that, although I'll have to skimp on the colour to get them done in a reasonable time!


This was a super hot chapter - it has everything: vore, cuteness, giant couples (my favourite type of scene btw!), and even a castration, which I guess does it for some people.

Brilliant stuff, keep it up!

Author's Response: Ha! Thanks! Your review had me rolling. I'm so glad you're enjoying my story. I would love to see that fluffy little scene of her watching him sleep. Although that sex scene... I am so looking forward to seeing your work at it!

Reviewer: mullac Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2017 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 19

A nice little calm chapter, with some Eric-backstory thrown in - I liked it! :)

Also, I'm working on another piece of fanart for you, but it's taking forever because it's basically 3 pictures in 1!

Author's Response:

OOh... Yay, more fanart! You are such a dear. In trade, I'll do a written comission for you. Any characters, it doesn't have to be mine. Any situation except scat and watersports. Just let me know what you want!

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 19

"My people are peaceful." So your race chose to begin speaking another language specifically to foster peace... so before that, I don't imagine there was peace.

Eric logic: Tor eats a doctor and his assistant? Eh, I'll tell her it's not cool but other than that I'm content. Tor eats like a dozen guys just doing their job who really didn't have a choice? Eh. Tor attacks every thing with a face in some way? Eh. Tor kidnaps someone? Eh she had good intentions for ME. But his father's wives don't like sweets? YOU ARE A HORRIBLE PERSON, THE ABSOLUTE SCUM OF THE EARTH! LUCIFER CRINGES AT THEE FOR THOU DOES NOT LIKE SUGARY FOOD! 

In all honesty without Tor, I guy like Eric probably wouldn't last anywhere. I mean, who else but Tor could stand him for very long?


Author's Response: Haha!! You just can't beat the logic of a 17 year old boy. And yes, Tor is immensely patient with Eric. That's why he's survived without the luxury of his father's home is because of her patience. Thanks for the review! It's always appreciated.

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: April 09 2017 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 18

Very well written and intressting plot but i have to admit i was dissapointed to only reach one accidently aproach to the southern region of tor (her pussy) and some g-rated breastplay in 18 chapters while placed alot more kinky tags into your story information.


I mean its ok when not every story out here is filled near burst with sexual interactions but then those stories shouldnt include more tags then, gentle and giantess, perhaps fantasy aswell.


Or was the short mention of antie junes chaireating butt the reason for the butt tag to your story info.. or perhaps the mentioned butt of the horses?


I actually hate such missleading informations. And so readed 18 chapters about a giantess story with butt in the tags without even ever got the main giantess butt mentioned. The description of her ended at her waistline...


Not funny

Author's Response: As I said in the beginning of the story, this is a story with some smut. Not a smut with a bit of plot. I am going to fulfill all the tags. It will just take time. All those fun tags will be filled out in detail.

Reviewer: camehere2 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2017 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 4

interesting plot

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