Reviews For Fly-Man and Mother
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Reviewer: microscopic boy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2017 2:39 PM Title: Friday

♥♥♥♥♥prefect♥♥♥♥♥

Reviewer: microscopic boy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2017 4:24 AM Title: Friday

please   continue

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2017 4:05 PM Title: Friday

I like your story

Reviewer: microscopic boy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2017 3:36 AM Title: Friday

prefect story

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Reviewer: YellowBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2017 12:24 PM Title: Friday

Please tell me this is a botched translation job.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 14 2017 5:49 AM Title: Friday

The plot idea was great, but you have to work on your English skills. Also never mix up tenses, always stay with simple past.

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