Date: January 12 2017 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
That was a pretty cool firs chapter. I'm a huge fan of the size ratio, and would love to see some more interaction, specially with the mom. And also why not explore some other scenarios like how the customers are handling these micro civilizations? Can't wait for more.
Date: January 12 2017 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Congrats on starting your first story! Anything featuring tiny Lilliputian civilizations will grab my attention, and I think you've got a good start. I like the setting you've created. And a 200 mile wide city?! Massive is an understatement!! I love that.
I gotta ask this, though. Was this inspired by or based off of The Incident at Grove View Apartments? It's a great ongoing story on this site, but the reason I ask is because it also has a character named Miranda and an Ashton City.
Anyway, I hope you decide to continue :)