Date: December 22 2017 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 1. Desiree Returns.
I have not read this story. I am simply here to respond to io1908.
There is not a single story from you. The fact you so bluntly and rudely attack this individual when english isn't his first language is a disgrace upon yourself.
I was attacked once for giving a constructive review, and for a split moment I actually thought I was in the wrong. If anything, your comment here shows me that I wasn't. It's the people like YOU that actually demoralize trying authors who only want to share their imaginations like the rest of us.
Does his writing suck? Idk, maybe. I'll be reading his story after I'm done here, but if I come back to say anything it'll be positive criticism. Not blatant insults like your pathetic self.
If you don't care to give positive feedback to try and help an author, then why bother saying anything at all?
If you had even ONE story under your belt on this website, I'd have ignored you entirely. But how dare you be so rude, when you don't even have any work to show for it.
Date: January 15 2017 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1. Desiree Returns.
Keep it up!
I would work on formatting. I think that would help a lot of things. You definitely have a lot of good stuff there, but it can be a bit of a pain to read when bunched together in traditional paragraphs.
Date: January 09 2017 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 1. Desiree Returns.
Whitebird, I hope you keep writing, because you actually try to consistently write new stories despite English being your third language- you show so much effort and persistence, unlike some other shitbags who criticize others while having zero fucking attempts of their own to show for it.