Date: March 19 2017 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 17: Two Offers
I hope Scott takes Maggie up on her offer, but if he really wanted to avoid that then why did he make his offer to Judy? She has every incentive to spread that information as widely as she can, including to Maggie or anyone else looking to make use of him. It's certainly an interesting gambit on Scott's part... I enjoy the variety that Maggie brings lately, a good mix of play, tantalization , gentleness, and interaction, but still just as capable of playing the domineering brat of days gone by.
Author's Response:
You're right that it's a bit of a gamble for Scott, though in this case he has alternate motives other than just being a helpful son
[Report This]Date: March 19 2017 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 16: Smell of Sin
I'm currious now as to where we've met her before. My first guess is the Shrink Act Files. Think I'll have to go back a re-read that one maybe
Author's Response:
To be cryptic: Sylvia does not appear in Shrink Act Files, but there will be more than one connection back to that story later on
[Report This]Date: March 18 2017 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 17: Two Offers
A better America for all, also getting stockholm syndrome from being underfoot seems like one of those story avenues nobody has touched on yet oddly.
Author's Response:
It's something I've hinted at in other stories, but it'll have a little more focus in this one
[Report This]Date: March 12 2017 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 16: Smell of Sin
Bailey is continuing the proud Jacksmith tradition of powerful brat goddesses.
Author's Response:
Well, somebody's got to
Date: March 09 2017 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 15: Any Friend of Maggie's
Maggie can be trusted keeping him in her cleats while playing soccer without him even going to the hospital, not sure what he's worried about... oh, wait, that's the pmrd :)
Author's Response:
Hehe. Scott has to learn to trust in the power of plot convenience ;)
[Report This]Date: March 06 2017 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 15: Any Friend of Maggie's
*tries to remember who this forward was*
Bailey seems like a fun throwback to old school Mags.
Author's Response:
We've met the forward before, but not in the Time-Out series. ;)
[Report This]Date: March 06 2017 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 15: Any Friend of Maggie's
Maggie seems awfully protective, i guess there's something about this new girl that doesn't make her think Scott would be safe with her. Though, she still invited her to their house.
Author's Response:
Scott will rarely be certain in this story just what's motivating Maggie's actions and whether he should be worried. In this case, he should probably be a little worried
[Report This]Date: March 03 2017 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
So, I'm digging the language. The hammer-like, unadorned stuff like your description of Scott in Judy's mouth, the description of the "plastic old lady-rapist" who "calls to toe-fuck him in the dark". I agree with Socksarecool about the dark vibe. It seems to me that Judy introduces something with a contextual pretense, i.e. the sore tooth, then we see later that she consistently encompasses that prior milestone of humiliation/trepidation as standard modus operandi for her own amusement/pleasure.
To me, Judy is warping Scott, little by little. At the end of this I predict Scott with either be free of his mother and living as a short-order cook in a little washington state town because of his PTSD... or he will be a willing (and thoroughly broken) trinket for Judy with all of the incestuousness that implies full blown and active on Judy's behalf.
But what do i know? lol
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks much. And that is absolutely Judy's modus operandi. Nothing she does is ever on accident. Of course I can't comment on the end of it now, but you're right to think that no one is coming out of this situation entirely clean.
Date: March 02 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Old In and Out
So she likes him tiny; mommy's timeout 1 wasn't *that* non-canon after all :)
After that "with..." I was wondering how much she knows about his current conditions, but I guess she will learn (almost) everything from Judy's book - I'm honestly curious to see her back when she's read it.
PS
Maybe I missed it, but (assuming nothing changes) how much does he have left now?
Author's Response:
The first Timeout is tricky because while it's non-canon because of the actual events not lining up with the rest of the stories in the series, there are certain character or tonal details that are the same, such as Ella maybe not minding having Scott be so small. Ella does know a lot about Scott's current conditions, which is why she's hesitant to leave. And he has at least a year left.
[Report This]Date: March 02 2017 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Old In and Out
Woah, What a chapter! This is absolutely amazing...
I don't comment much but so far I am getting a really dark vibe based on what I have been reading so far. I wouldn't be surprised if this is the turning point because I have a feeling that Scott is going to have a really tough time in the upcoming chapters.
The incestuous undertones always make you wonder if something is going to happen, like when you used the phrase "titillated giggle" in the Maggie chapter and kept pressing on his dick. Last story she was rubbing Scott against her breasts just to stimulate herself but it seems like she has matured after Nancy raped him. I kind of miss the domineering Maggie but I am really enjoying this one as well.
His mother on the other hand stroked at his dick with her tongue, pinned it during the therapy session and allows Nancy to "use him". I don't think you will go outright incest(Jack and Carly style) but I wouldn't be surprised if some "stuff" happens with the way Judy is acting and has acted in previous stories. I believe in TO3, Judy was "Getting off" on Scott massaging her feet and being trapped under her.
Before I forget, is this the story where we meet Scott's father? I can't wait to see that interaction.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! There's definitely some darkness to come. You're right that this story is not Jack and Carly style; it's meant to constantly tease the issue and increase the pressure. We will be meeting Scott's father in this story.
Date: February 27 2017 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 13: Ella Arrives
It just occurred to me that, since the first episode is officially non-canon, we need more Ella - we hardly know her!
(PS: I almost freaked out last time because I misread those 13 months as 13 months since their last meeting, not their last time *alone* :)
Author's Response:
Hehe. Ella will make more appearances in this story than her previous cameos. And yeah, the 13 months is since TO5 when he first went into house arrest
[Report This]Date: February 26 2017 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 13: Ella Arrives
Well Maggie sure delivered on what she said much quicker than I thought haha. Of course Judy has to exert her power over the little bit of freedom that Scott gets. Should've seen that coming really.
Author's Response:
Maggie's not usually one for patience. And Judy's just a fixture of Scott's every move at this point
[Report This]Date: February 25 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 3: Freshen Up
I DID'NT CARE TO MUCH FOR THE STORY,NO SEX AND TO MUCH ON FEET PLUS IF SCOT HATES SO MUCH HE DOSE'NT DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT HE JUST OBEYS AN COMPLAINS ALL THE TIME.WON'T YOU HAVE SCOT LET PEPOLE KNW WHAT HE REALLY FEELS ABOUT GOING THREW
Author's Response:
Looks like someone had too much coffee
[Report This]Date: February 25 2017 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 13: Ella Arrives
Maggie is truly blossoming into a quite the good egg, quite the good egg.
Author's Response:
And in an environment of mostly rotten ones, no less
Date: February 19 2017 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 12: Hot and Cold
Wtf - thirteen months?! That explains a lot... but I guess Judy can get away counting time with the family as visits.
Author's Response:
Basically, yeah. Ella can come into the house, and she can go places with Scott as long as a family member comes along. But still not quite the same for Scott.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2017 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 12: Hot and Cold
Maggie has really matured into a kindler titaness.
Author's Response:
Which is lucky for Scott, because there are plenty of unkindly ones coming up
Date: February 15 2017 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 10: Come to Nancy
I was under the impression the agreement was not to let Nancy touch him or something like that, but it's one of the few parts of the story I'm NOT rereading, so I'm probably wrong. Still, that he stayed calm after "Did that bother you?" is amazing, he could have at least asked that she keeps Nancy away from him period rather than building a blacklist of things she won't do AFTER she's done them at least once - or if it doesn't work, use a whitelist: agree that Nancy is allowed x,y,z and nothing else.
Still shocked.
Author's Response:
The agreement is more that Nancy won't do what she did to him at the end of TO6 again; she's still cleared to play with him. Scott just decides to pick his battles
[Report This]Date: February 15 2017 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
As per usual, fantastic work. Your knack for tracing the edge of exactly what the reader THINKS he wants to happen is uncanny.
The incestuous undertones run so strongly throughout the entire series, but they never quite push beyond the simple brush of a mother or sister's toes or tongue against the member of someone who can't quite tell if they want it or not. The tension is enough to make one dizzy.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. That balance of tones is one of my favorite things to write in these stories.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2017 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 11: Growing Up Fast
We're all glad for Maggie!
Author's Response:
Who wouldn't be?
[Report This]Date: February 14 2017 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 11: Growing Up Fast
I really do love that Scott and Maggie are getting along. She even made sure her feet didn't stink.
I also do hope to see her react to Nancy in some way. Like maybe glare at her or somesuch.
Author's Response:
This is certainly the best they've yet gotten along in the series. We'll see Maggie and Nancy in a scene together later in the story.