[Report This]Date: June 13 2017 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
Wow! I seriously did not see that coming! I bet Judy is going to come up with an excuse to keep Kyles height down there with Scott... And it's nice to see Kyle acting more brotherly towards Scott finally. It's about time the poor guy got a friend!
Author's Response:
Judy tends to be more of an endurance runner than a sprinter when it comes to punishments
[Report This]Date: June 13 2017 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
I kinda wonder what would have happened if it was Maggie that had stood up to Judy. Judy might give her more leeway, but i'm sure even that has limits.
Though i'm also sure Maggie probably would have found a way to have Scott talking with his girlfriend without alerting Judy, she has before if i'm remembering correctly.
Author's Response:
I'm glad somebody's thinking about this. Maggie's specific power relationship with her parent will be further explored in this story, especially nearer to the end. Hold that thought. ;)
Date: June 13 2017 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
I forgot in the heat of the moment - the way I pictured it in my head, Judy is in front of them, slippers ready to be worn, and somehow Kyle doesn't need to ask "which left, my left or the left slipper?"
But i guess they must be between Judy and the slippers - for some reason I couldn't get this silly thoughts out of my mind.
Author's Response:
Hehe. A fair point. Maybe Kyle just lucked out and the left slipper was also on his left.
Date: June 13 2017 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
Letting Kyle go wouldn't have been fair towards Scott, I see :)
Still I wonder if Maggie will be unaffected when she finds out what happened to Kyle and why
Author's Response:
All I'll say is that Maggie's reaction to seeing Kyle shrunk may be slightly different than it usually is for Scott, even if we don't see it all on the surface
Date: June 13 2017 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
Excellent!
I like the level of detail here. I have been hoping you expand on what happens underneath of Judy a few more times. Over the course of the story arc you get a good idea and it never hurts to add to that evidence a little from time to time.
I still have a soft spot for Scott underneath her big toe at an inch in height, which was something done in the first story of this series. I always found that iconic, since it is a theme repeated through several old and lost to us authors of yesteryear.
The more you write in this series the more I add to my wishlist for it. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks much. There will be several opportunities for Scott to be at his smallest and underfoot in later chapters.
Date: June 13 2017 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Interesting to see what Kyle's reactiom will be once he's full sized again. Will he still be so nice to his brother? I'll admit I'm curious to see if he ever goes after Scott when he's small like Judy and Maggie do...
Author's Response:
Time will tell. Luckily for Scott, Kyle tends to be a bit more rational of a person than his mother and sister seem
Date: June 12 2017 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
The last sentence definitely made me wonder what's going on through Kyle's head right now. That's some real motherly love she's giving him.
Author's Response:
We'll see how Kyle's feeling about this soon once Judy gives them a break
[Report This]Date: June 12 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
omg, please tell me we'll get Kyle's perspective too
Author's Response:
We won't necessarily get a full-on Kyle POV like we usually do for Scott, but we'll indeed get a better idea of how he feels about all this later
[Report This]Date: June 12 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
She's tough but fair.
Author's Response:
Like any good mother should be
Date: June 08 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
It's brave of Kyle to stand up to Judy, but there's going to be complications, since she owns the house he lives in.
Author's Response:
You're definitely right about that. In this case, Kyle is going more on principle than future planning.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2017 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
Got around to reading this.
Still think Judy is the greatest milf of all time.
The first impression I had of the shrink club was like some sort of pseudo alcoholics anonymous. I still some what feel that way and it make me smile. Was also great to see a few tiny daughters there and even I think one giant dad(who didn't speak thank god lol).
Maggie's character has matured perfectly but I'm most surprised about Kyle's character arc. He went from this apathetic kid to actually being Scott's greatest ally in the house. Which seems to have been his downfall. I cannot wait to see what Judy does with two tiny kids. Hope they are both down to her favorite height.
Took a bit but you've given I little more info on Scott's dad. That would seriously be the ultimate scenario for me because Judy could finally shove a tiny inside her(hopefully bushy) vagina.
Anyways, fantastic story and series. I'm really looking forward to what the future holds for the Stevens household.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks. AA was definitely a small inspiration for the style of the shrink therapy meetings. Kyle's journey has been slow the last couple of stories, but things are finally coming to a head. We'll see Judy's reaction in the next chapter. Scott's dad will be making an appearance later on in the story, and not just as a quick "here he is, now the story's over" role.
Date: June 08 2017 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
Wow... I expected Scott to get out of it by admitting that they were talking about their father,
instead for the first time since the big bang I'm happy to see Kyle in a chapter!
Now you really have me wondering what she's going to do next
- if it becomes known she shrunk him for what he did, and how she found out, that will be *bad* PR
- otoh, she might find a way to use it to her advantage, showing she understands Kyle's concern for his brother,
and maybe finding a way to use this and who-knows-what-else to keep him shrunken some more
or make a good story for the public ("Kyle is guilty of being kind-hearted, but Scott,
he needs more time to rehab...")
Author's Response:
Admitting they were talking about their father might not be a great move, either, as Judy tends to dodge that subject. We'll begin to unravel Judy's machinations for this scenario in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: June 07 2017 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
I love that Kyle stood up to his mother. Though i also look forward to Judy punishing someone besides just Scott. Previous stories had mentioned that she also punished Kyle and Maggie, but we haven't seen it.
I also wonder if this outburst will spare Scott, since Judy will probably be angrier with Kyle right now.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! The coming chapters, and really this story overall by the end, is going to examine closer how Judy treats and hands out consequences differently to her kids.
And it's probably wishful thinking to hope Scott will be spared. ;)
Date: June 07 2017 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
I hope that she doesn't shrink Kyle as well. That only leaves one sibling left to save the day. Or she can give one of them to Maggie and keep one to herself? Great story. I wonder if Scott is regrettng not going with that one girl at Soccer Camp when he could have escaped this mess. :)
Author's Response:
There may well be a bit of shared one-on-one time in the upcoming chapters. And that story about the soccer camp is meant to act as a weird sort of ghost in Scott's past, to imagine how the trajectory of his life might've been different.
Date: June 07 2017 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
Man I hate Judy. She is so evil. All he wanted to do was talk to his girlfriend. She is a real bitch lol. I love your stories. I hope Judy get's something coming to her.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. I won't say how, but Judy may not necessarily do what she's about to do to the boys without a few long-term consequences among other characters.
[Report This]Date: June 07 2017 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
The son finally stands up to the mother, interesting...
Author's Response:
At long last
[Report This]Date: June 01 2017 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 22: Doing Her a Favor
Exciting!!! Can't wait for more! Really enjoying this story. Hopefully more Maggie soon too, eh?
Author's Response: Maggie will be back very soon
[Report This]Date: June 01 2017 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 22: Doing Her a Favor
Getting some mixed messages from what she's saying and offering and the fact that she does seem to like playing with him, especially when he's naked.
Author's Response: Mixed messages are basically the summation of the guy's life now
Date: June 01 2017 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 22: Doing Her a Favor
First! ;p
I didn't really know what to expect, but between the pillow and not believing his answers I'm definitely surprised!
Author's Response: Scott was definitely more surprised than anyone
Date: June 01 2017 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 21: Son for Rental
This chapter and the previous make me wish Judy had a twin sister that works as a teacher...
Author's Response: A long time me ago I'd actually planned to give Judy a sister. But ultimately, one controlling matriarch in Scott's life is probably more than enough.