[Report This]Date: June 13 2017 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
Wow! I seriously did not see that coming! I bet Judy is going to come up with an excuse to keep Kyles height down there with Scott... And it's nice to see Kyle acting more brotherly towards Scott finally. It's about time the poor guy got a friend!
Author's Response:
Judy tends to be more of an endurance runner than a sprinter when it comes to punishments
[Report This]Date: June 13 2017 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
I kinda wonder what would have happened if it was Maggie that had stood up to Judy. Judy might give her more leeway, but i'm sure even that has limits.
Though i'm also sure Maggie probably would have found a way to have Scott talking with his girlfriend without alerting Judy, she has before if i'm remembering correctly.
Author's Response:
I'm glad somebody's thinking about this. Maggie's specific power relationship with her parent will be further explored in this story, especially nearer to the end. Hold that thought. ;)
Date: June 13 2017 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
I forgot in the heat of the moment - the way I pictured it in my head, Judy is in front of them, slippers ready to be worn, and somehow Kyle doesn't need to ask "which left, my left or the left slipper?"
But i guess they must be between Judy and the slippers - for some reason I couldn't get this silly thoughts out of my mind.
Author's Response:
Hehe. A fair point. Maybe Kyle just lucked out and the left slipper was also on his left.
Date: June 13 2017 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
Letting Kyle go wouldn't have been fair towards Scott, I see :)
Still I wonder if Maggie will be unaffected when she finds out what happened to Kyle and why
Author's Response:
All I'll say is that Maggie's reaction to seeing Kyle shrunk may be slightly different than it usually is for Scott, even if we don't see it all on the surface
Date: June 13 2017 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
Excellent!
I like the level of detail here. I have been hoping you expand on what happens underneath of Judy a few more times. Over the course of the story arc you get a good idea and it never hurts to add to that evidence a little from time to time.
I still have a soft spot for Scott underneath her big toe at an inch in height, which was something done in the first story of this series. I always found that iconic, since it is a theme repeated through several old and lost to us authors of yesteryear.
The more you write in this series the more I add to my wishlist for it. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks much. There will be several opportunities for Scott to be at his smallest and underfoot in later chapters.
Date: June 12 2017 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
The last sentence definitely made me wonder what's going on through Kyle's head right now. That's some real motherly love she's giving him.
Author's Response:
We'll see how Kyle's feeling about this soon once Judy gives them a break
[Report This]Date: June 12 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
She's tough but fair.
Author's Response:
Like any good mother should be