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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Old In and Out

So she likes him tiny; mommy's timeout 1 wasn't *that* non-canon after all :)

After that "with..." I was wondering how much she knows about his current conditions, but I guess she will learn (almost) everything from Judy's book - I'm honestly curious to see her back when she's read it.

PS
Maybe I missed it, but (assuming nothing changes) how much does he have left now?

Author's Response:

The first Timeout is tricky because while it's non-canon because of the actual events not lining up with the rest of the stories in the series, there are certain character or tonal details that are the same, such as Ella maybe not minding having Scott be so small. Ella does know a lot about Scott's current conditions, which is why she's hesitant to leave. And he has at least a year left.

Reviewer: socksarecool Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2017 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Old In and Out

Woah, What a chapter! This is absolutely amazing... 

I don't comment much but so far I am getting a really dark vibe based on what I have been reading so far. I wouldn't be surprised if this is the turning point because I have a feeling that Scott is going to have a really tough time in the upcoming chapters.

The incestuous undertones always make you wonder if something is going to happen, like when you used the phrase "titillated giggle" in the Maggie chapter and kept pressing on his dick. Last story she was rubbing Scott against her breasts just to stimulate herself but it seems like she has matured after Nancy raped him. I kind of miss the domineering Maggie but I am really enjoying this one as well.

His mother on the other hand stroked at his dick with her tongue, pinned it during the therapy session and allows Nancy to "use him". I don't think you will go outright incest(Jack and Carly style) but I wouldn't be surprised if some "stuff" happens with the way Judy is acting and has acted in previous stories. I believe in TO3, Judy was "Getting off" on Scott massaging her feet and being trapped under her.

Before I forget, is this the story where we meet Scott's father? I can't wait to see that interaction. 



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! There's definitely some darkness to come. You're right that this story is not Jack and Carly style; it's meant to constantly tease the issue and increase the pressure. We will be meeting Scott's father in this story.

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