Date: February 05 2017 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 9: Hot Coffee
Darn typo - I meant great to see *Carolyn* back, poor Scott; I can't stand Nancy (mostly because of how Judy handled their previous meeting tbf)
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Ha! I can understand that. Most people probably aren't as glad to see Nancy back, including Scott.
[Report This]Date: February 04 2017 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 9: Hot Coffee
Quite the chapter my good man.
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Thanks!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2017 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 9: Hot Coffee
Ah, man. That bit about the "foot-gigolo" made me laugh. I can imagine worse jobs. Oh boy Nancy's back too! And who could this Sylvia lady be? Great work!
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Good to hear. I'm sure it's a job more than a few people on this site might spend a split second considering if it were possible.
Date: February 04 2017 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 9: Hot Coffee
Great to see Nancy is back! (even if, Nancy is back, a long time without Maggie... too good to be true, it must be a trap) Nancy's always glad to be back. Judy does remember the agreement with Scott, but that doesn't necessarily mean she doesn't define some of the terms differently than he does. And we'll hear a little more about this woman in coming chapters. Nice catch on the typo.
About Nancy, I really really hope Ms Stevens remembers her agreement with Scott.
In the meantime, I'll wait to see what's so special about this woman that Judy would actually let him out of the house with her(!)
PS: "beyond which that which" - I'm partially confident it's a typo, but I'm also too tired to be certain :)
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