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Reviewer: Cactusjeff1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2017 9:58 PM Title: History class

Please post a few more chapters and finish the story in some way. It is getting interesting but tiresome to like a story on this site and it never have an ending. You are doing great and I can't wait to see what you write next.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 2:25 PM Title: History class

great chapter
super-described everything as if I was there
Please more

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 1:40 PM Title: History class

Paragraphs! What hapenede to your paragraphs? Those are huge! Did you have formatting issues?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 10:04 AM Title: History class

Sorry for my delayed review. I'm currently traveling and internet isn't as plentiful as I thought. I really hope you do continue.

You could have Jasmine finish her classes and then she goes home and she gives Percy to her mom so she can enjoy him. Jasmine said that the teaching sucks, so I think it could work.

Also, I love the artwork that Stubbornstain posted. Makes me want to check out his deviantart profile. Loved the image.

If I was Percy, I would jump right into that "cavern". Haha. If only he appreciates the sweetness of fresh vagina. I like Percy fearing it. Makes it more fun.

I hope you continue. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: seanpatty Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 5:18 AM Title: History class

Great chapter... Please please continue.  At least take us up to Jasmine's cycle :P..

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