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Reviewer: matrix2590117 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2017 5:39 PM Title: Lush imprisonment

Sooo fantastic 

Continue plzzz

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2017 1:01 PM Title: Lush imprisonment

I actually liked this chapter. The ending made me smile.

The mother is sad at the loss of her son. The girl wants to share the joy she has with Percy with her mom. If I'm connecting the dots correctly, Percy will be given to her mom.

This is fantastic if that's true. This time, the mom will definitely keep this guy with her at all times becuase now she doesn't want to lose another boy.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

thank you for the lengthy review as always! you continue to spark my ideas with your persistent want for the mother! i indeed do have ideas for her...ill tell you that..

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2017 11:38 AM Title: Lush imprisonment

I don't know about lush, but that is some prison. I'd hate it in there. Too clammy. But another nice chapter.



Author's Response:

haha! thank you! yes i agree maybe not lush to him, but she finds it a lush imprisonment for him!

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