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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2016 1:30 PM Title: Bagged

Percy seems like a nice person. If it was a nasty person who was, you know, shrunk, I'd be prastically rooting for the shrinker. I feel a bit sad reading about Percy's plight. Yet I want to find out more and keep reading.

 

The short, snappy, chapters seem to work for this story. You don't spend much time getting straight to the point. I like that.



Author's Response:

I agree, writing it was sad enough, having this girl change his life. I do hope you read on in future, for i think you'll be quite surprised. 



Author's Response:

I agree, writing it was sad enough, having this girl change his life. I do hope you read on in future, for i think you'll be quite surprised. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2016 1:27 PM Title: Bagged

Hmm. So there seems to be another boy caught too. And that boy was caught on Monday.

What's funny is that we know the name of this random boy on the news but not the main characters! You really like to reveal things one at a time, haha.

I bet his phone is going to be destroyed if he ever sees it again. It's probably crashed in between the regular sized objects in the purse/bag.

I don't mind waiting for the fun parts. Heck, right now it would be strangers having fun, which would be awkward. I need to know the characters first in order to appreciate the fun.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Glad you are currently enjoying the story, i hope in future i can continue enticing you with my content.

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