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Reviewer: SoinaGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2017 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: A New Student

Really really really (cannot stress this enough) really great story! My mind is blown at your incredible writing skills mate. Keep it up I'm so excited to see what happens next to Sophie!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks I appreciate that. There will be more At-Lass stories soon.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2017 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: A New Student

I could see Brother Neymar as some sort of entity possessing Brother Brooks, using him as a vessel to carry out his deeds. 



Author's Response:

That could happen

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2016 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: A New Student

Do you think Brother Neymar will use a form of mind control on At-Lass? Take control of the suit and her mind, and he can rule the world. 



Author's Response:

Maybe that could happen

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2016 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: A New Student

Brother Neymar? I know he's popular but still, to have your own cult? That's another level entirely. 



Author's Response:

He is pretty decent

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