Date: December 20 2016 10:57 PM Title: A Warm Golden Morning
Decent little story, wish it were longer. One thing that would of been amazing though is if the sister revealed she knew it was him. If I'm right you hinted she did this to him anyway.
Yeah, that would've actually made more sense. I might work on this story and fix a few things here in a few days ^w^ Glad you liked it though!
Date: December 20 2016 10:40 AM Title: A Warm Golden Morning
Great story! I appreciate your storyline and detailed descriptions. Even though you stated that this was your single foray into the water sports arena, you should consider writing more. Well done.
Thank you, Donnert. Glad you enjoyed the story! ^w^ I may or may not write more of these types of stories, I just don't got a whole lot of ideas at this very moment for one.