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Reviewer: Seagl Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2016 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 2

This story has a lot of potential. I look forward to what you write.

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

I really like the way you write. It's a quick-pace style yet not sloppy at all. I hope you'll continue on with this story

Reviewer: SuperD Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2016 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

Very interesting preamble to the story. It did feel like a young man's memory of when he was a lot younger and it did feel like the perceptions of a little boy. It will be interesting what the main story is going to be like.



Author's Response:

Thank you my friend! The main story will hopefully be worthy of a rating!

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