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Reviewer: Xammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2017 2:10 AM Title: Out of the Endless Murk

You tell a great story. Your mask of the Gods series feels like a non fetish piece. It feels like a TV series/movie with how well you describe your scenes and how the charactera interact with each other. Please continue all your unfinished stories! Love em all!



Author's Response:

I hope to, thanks for the support!

 

Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2016 9:35 AM Title: Out of the Endless Murk

Sons of men has great potential, shorter summary paragraph would help, we can help it in the shoutbox, really like what you started there.

Author's Response:

Thanks man, I'll be updating it again soon! 

Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2016 8:43 AM Title: Out of the Endless Murk

Interesting, your taking your time with the setup, but it's solid

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2016 5:45 AM Title: Out of the Endless Murk

I do hope you'll continue the Sons of Men , its so riveting. Reviews will come, don't worry. 

Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2016 6:45 AM Title: Out of the Endless Murk

Terrific start! Don't worry about reviews at this point, you've got a good thing going, get some more meat on it and we'll try to promote it in the shout box

Reviewer: writer27 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2016 4:13 PM Title: Out of the Endless Murk

What do you mean? A lot of people commented and liked "The Masks of God's"



Author's Response:

Oh yeah that one was quite the hit. my other two, Sons of Men and the superhero one weren't getting much response 

Reviewer: hal84 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2016 5:05 AM Title: Out of the Endless Murk

I look forward to reading more of this story, you write like no other person on this site

Author's Response:

Thanks man, I plan on keeping up with this one!

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