Date: December 10 2017 6:23 AM Title: Oozy Goozy
These last few chapters were intense, but in a really good way :D I like how all of the characters have distinct personalities. One of the issues that I have with most couples stories is that the giant tends to lack a personality and he's basically there for the sex scenes. Trevor is angry and possessive, and although I definitely wouldn't call him a good person, he seems like an actual person. Brittany and Trevor's relationship is incredibly toxic, but it shows how much danger Natalie is in. I'm imagining that this story can go in all sorts of different directions, so I'm interested to see where you take it.
Date: December 09 2017 9:22 PM Title: Oozy Goozy
Wow, that was super hot! That Trever is a total mood killer though, lol. Brittany definitely needs more alone time with Natalie *weg*
Is it weird that I was pissed at Trever for hitting Brittany and not at Brittany for her treatment of Natalie??? Naa :)
Haha that is interesting! But you know, Brittany and Trevor's relationship was toxic from the start; they both seem to crave dominance. The next chapter will likely focus on Trevor and Natalie, but I have a feeling Brittany will be back. Now that she's had a taste of complete and total domination, I doubt she'll give it up without a fight.
Date: December 21 2016 7:50 AM Title: Sucked into the Swell
So I'll admit to jumping straight to chapter 5. Wow! Super hot. :-) Then I started reading from chapter 1 and was very impressed by the rest as well. Your dialogue is great, and the level of detail in your descriptions is perfect. Please keep up the good work!
Date: December 14 2016 6:34 PM Title: Strip
Dammit, I thought I was gonna find out what happens to Natalie when I saw this at the top of most recent! You tease! :P
This is great so far, good description and flow. keep it up!
What can I say, I get my kicks from making people suffer! Thanks for the feedback, I promise to have the real new chapter up in a day or two :) :)
Date: December 12 2016 1:28 PM Title: A wish that could have been worded better
This story is already among my favorites
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think it was actually one of your stories that first introduced me to the beauty that is giant couples