update please? :) leaving it in my favorite chapter, with the toilet flush of Sammy having no idea of the cruel fate of the guy in his ass, just the best part, hope to see more in this again. Last chapter with the cumrag was also the best

HeY!! Hope you liked my ass long review, ha. And youll have time again soon to continue, just can't wait. This chapter was just so good, hope you liked my ideas and would love so much to see them happening in future chapters. So glad this story changed into scat and watersports, I had wished a lot for it to happen. This is truly by far the best story you wrote so far, and it will stay just a favorite of mine forever.

I had such a goodtime last hour reading this and the one before, I had to read several lines lots of times in a row because how good it was. This is one of the best works I read on here. Hope to see way more chapters like this, nasty kinky and vulgar plots are the best.

after the vore and food tf, this even better. dirty plots are the best, scat and watersports is really a turn on, especially of the nice nature of the protagonist and how he has no clue of the things he does unwittingly

wish i were given powers like that in school. was bullied a lot during school, that would have been fun. liked even more

I didnt plan this becoming so long, but I just had to write on. And had to split it now into three parts.

I just cant describe to you how great this chapter was, and how much fun I fad reading it. Hope you had same as much fun writing it, and lots of more will follow in the same style. You just know how to do it write, and how to make Sammy react, speak, and the bullies around him. Everything is just so good already, I wouldnt need to give you any advise to improve.

I loved how Sammy was in this giggling state, like you would be after throwing up, and then felt better, and was just giggling but also really soon would fell in this dream state and sleepy.

I liked the part where Sammy whispered in falling asleep "I love you Lucas.", and Lucas just walked out of the room in the correct timing. I find the idea so much better, of Lucas not knowing that Sammy mostly was gay. Hope you wont change it in the plot. I find it way more appealing, if Lucas was straight. Also please dont kill Lucas off during the plot, I like him same as much as Sammy already.

The last third of the chapter starting... the dessert, in the form of "chocolate dessert". But before, the second best part of the whole plot (I have three favorite parts, the first mentioned above with the vomitting, now here the second, and the third coming up). Of how you killed Vince. It was the most degrading, humiliting, "meaningless" form imaginable. Making it so damn good. The idea of Vince dying because of a toxic foul fart was suddenly rocked into Sammys rectum, from the horrific depth of Sammys intestines. Filling it like a balloon, then *ppfff*ing it out of the slimy, hard closed wringled anus. Sammy totally blissfully unaware, feeling just good and rubbing himself into the blanket... where at the same time:

All those chose of words like "tunnel of death", the dark gurgles from digestion "defeated as he could only listen to Sammy digest whatever it was he ate last.", which was again such an ironic hint, because of the digested remains, now caked into turds, lurking around those dark tunnels, containing the digested remains of a banana, some M&Ms, chips a sandwich... and Chad.

"Vince felt a rumbling in the distance"... and then the pressure change, the foul fishy toxic gas inflating the "sack" aka Sammys rectum, and Vince literally being gased out in a gas chamber. Missed a bit of things like him vomitting his guts out, maybe even him pissing in the process , spastiically on the "floor", whimpering and screaming for his mommy, and as a contrast, Sammy just feeling good and falling sleeep again. What a way to go, I would love to see more like this in upcoming chapters.

And now the third best part, and I know I should come to an end. I will try my best :) I just love, love, love the idea of Vince becoming the iner layer skin of Sammys rectum. This is just such a damn humiliating and tortures idea. And how you did it...

Vince realizing at first he was "dead", thinking it was over and he could even have some fun of being a "ghost", and then how you made it so much worse, is just so good. How he was like "at least it's all over, it cant get any worse like this"... WRONG!

The idea of a silo sized turd, slowly..., "walking" over you, literally breaking and smearing your body into a thin film, was incredible. I cant think of a more nightmarish concept than this, actually I can ehe, more about it at the end of this. You thought of mostly everything agaon on here, like the mentioning of "solid/semi-solid" hinting that the turd had some soft creamy parts of course too.

One "bummer" though, I would love in upcoming chapters, that the transformed character doesnt lose his conscious, and would literally eternally suffer in "hell". Because of this being a fictional story, like an anime, the characters also wont get older if you dont write out, and they would "always" stay this age, and the characters meant to be suffer, suffering like in an eternal hell place, especially like here. I couldnt imagine some worse place, of becoming the inner skin of a boys rectum, meant to have turds "parked" on top of you every day, and then slowly slide over you, sliding over your "mouth", inside of it, the horrible foul fishy smell, and him "vomitting" everytime, screaming in his mind, and the boy outside, jsut casually taking a dump, withouth the slighest idea of the horrors his bodily functions were doing at that moment to a previous human being.

As a closer, I liked how you made Sammy feel a bit shy and uncomfortable actually using Lucas toilet gor a dump. I always felt the same way when I slept at a friends but also felt beter afterwards and just forgot about, literally the moment when flushed the "problems" away. I feel so connected with this story, it's insane. It's like you make the reader go through high school again, but with a nightmarish scifi twist. Making this story so great, and already unforgettable.

Coming to an end, I hope you liked my "little" review :) Hope to see the story continuing like this, and have lots of more future chapters. I would just LOVE more than anything to see maybe a teacher becoming Sammys or Lucas anus, which was actually the one thing I mentioned which would be even... worse. Of still being alive and feel a turd "vomitting" out of your mouth and throat from your "stomach", how it slowly was pressed over your tongue, your senses, and your mouth had no control anymore, just spastic moving in the contracts of the "owners" body.

Then the idea with some jocks turning into tiny half fly half human hybrids, like in the movie The Fly, fly body, fly size of course, but with their human heads still attached, and theym trying to get help from mostly Sammy and Lucas in school, maybe even following Sammy home, and meeting a horrific end of course, as a smear on a rolled up magazine, or even worse. It could also fit because of insect "blood" not being red but also be blueish sometimes, so it wouldnt even notcied by Sammy at all.

Then I had the idea, of someine turning into a few droplets of "water", maybe a chemistry project homework, in a test tube. Then Sammy accidentally let the rube drop or roll of his desk, the fluid dropping to the desk or floor. Shit! Looking around seeing no tissue to wipe the fluids off, Sammys notics a used boxershorts of his on the ground next to his bed, and used it to wipe off the tiny droplets, there no harm done! The poor liquid boy screaming, of ending in the worst place of the hew "home", in the inner back area of the boxers down where it would touch the asshole, when forming a wedgie. The next day Sammy would also wear this very boxers in a sleepy state stepping into them.

Another idea, there was a bicyclist day at school, of the sports period, making a bicyclist race. The could be a very dramatic and unfortunate event for one of the "cool", of course sport and cocky jocks, ending as a small portable toilet box, something like this: 
http://i.imgur.com/AKdlGhJ.png

Which were standing on tables during the race course together with drinks. So the kids wouldnt go into the wild and pollute the enviroment. And as worse as can it get, the cocky kid becoming one of those and used by Sammy, feeling even embarrassed to go "in the wild" and taking a dump. Filling the tube behind a closed curtain, plopping in the stained toilet paper, closing it, coming out, and throwing it in the next standing waste bin, happily feeling better, moving along on his bike.

Thank you for making my day with this chapter, I actually didnt expect so fast to see a new one. Hope you have a nice upcoming Easter time. Hope you liked my review as much as I loved this chapter. Youre my hero. Have a wonderful day!!!

Ok, I don t know where to start ... a second chapter out so fast? That took me so by surprise, what a great surprise... first, this is the best chapter of them all. Chapter 3 was already on such a high level, but this even topped it.

Longest chapter of them, 3 was already great, I love longer chapters, and you put so much details and love into this, it's IN-SANE!!! I hope I can review about everything which came to me while reading this epic chapter, hope I dont miss anything out, so lets start!

The intro was again really good again, same as in chapter 3 with Sammy waking up with a bit wet underpants. Here, with his mom had bought a package of peanut M&Ms and Sammy froze for a moment, this was a good laugh already. I just love so much, how you developed this story, of things "going wrong" leading to Sammy forget things, think of them as dreams, and in this chapter, you put a new epic one out, more to it later. Please continue in this style, it's soo much better Sammy not being aware about the changes happening around him.

I just love the unfair aspect of it so much, 'Shrugging it off Sammy forgot all about the M&M's and went about his day.', where the remains of Chad and the food which was eatin with him were at this moment mostly in the lower end part of Sammys small intestine, being entering his large intestine mostly. And Sammy literally "didnt give a shit", or will he? ehehe, no, worse, he was totally unaware about the horrors he put those people through. And you make it even better, because of Sammy being such a nice, twink, "gay" character, always polite, smiling, and being literally the "loser" of the school, skinny, no muscles. More about this a bit later.

I have to sum up faster, just talked about the intro, and the story didnt even start and I hve already said a lot. See this is the reason why I am so on love with this, because you put so much details into your work and in between the lines, it's just insane. This story is now already one of the best I ever read on here, especially chapter 3 and 4 added to that.

The idea of the party being a costume party, fantastic... and how the fun part of the chapter begins, and it was... was, so much better than I imagined everything in my mind, which could have happened. I actually thought a lot since chapter 3, what would happen at that party. But you wrote it out so much better, than everything I thought of.

Sammy going as a bunny, AAAAH, epic!! You rock man, bunny ears and tail, I have it so vivid in my mind, fitting so perfectly with the character Sammy in a whole. And also the makeup, whiskers and a bunny nose, I just loved that ideas so much... I could see him actually like this:

http://i.imgur.com/6MWN3vl.pnghttp://i.imgur.com/f1OiTrE.png

but with skinny fitting shorts, would make such a hot outfit.

And then you did it so much better of what I had in mind. I already knew something like this would happen, of the boys at the party, the owner of the house, all those sports dudes, straight of course, all now best buddies with Lucas, and them would never had invited such a loser like Sammy to their cool high school party. And now... Vince opening the door, and... PHAHA! Looking down on this bunny boy. Such a great part.

The best was how Sammy wasnt totally not realizsing before or it didnt came to his mind, this could be a bad idea. It's so realistic, because of he had all butterflies in his tummy because of Lucas invited him, and I actually did something like this before, where I just thought in one direction, not seeing other possibilities.

Best part to this point: "The only way your getting into this party is if you and me, go over there," Vince said pointing toward some bushes. "And I pull my pants down and you suck me off. Then maybe, and just maybe, I'll think about it."

What a fantastic idea!! I never even thought of this, but it fits so perfectly. I love humiliating parts like this so much, and it fits so great. Could see straight teenagers like this actually tell "fags" to suck them off, and make a fun out of it, or even worse, even go through with it. How horrific Sammy must felt at that point, and everything what happened later in the chapters is such a perfect backfire at Vince. This chapter is just so amazing in so many levels, it's just insane...

Loved how Lucas stood for his friend, for a second I was a bit afraid of them leaving, and the party plot was canceled, but you, as before so many times, came to the rescue with a "plan b" and saved the moment. I think I hvent said this before, but you have this fantastic talent, of making surprise parts. Your plot is so interesting, and not just going into one line, always going path a, path a, path a, like so many bad authors do on this site. You have just a damn high level of details, character depth, and intelligent plot. You could be an author selling your stuff.

I was so glad at this point, literally screaming into my computer screen, YES! So glad you made them enter the house, and the party would get started. And then totally such a great idea, of the boys cheering up Lucas, literally leading them away from Sammy, having lost sight of where the boys went, and then Vince kicking Sammy, landing on his bunny butt, and how he felt hurt Lucas didnt notice, but just "swallowed" it. I also loved how it was literally eating on Vince, that this fag and loser was allowed into his home. This would make everything so much even better of what would happen afterwards. It's not just unfair, it's truly mean, of Sammy being such a nice character totally unaware of the horrors of those bullies, who though just deserved everything of it.

You have this great talent of not "just" making one point, no, you do several, and this is the difference in this story to others, making it a 10 out of 10. Here, it is literally a hit in Vinces face, because it was his home where the party happened, and then he ended as this bunny boys .. rectum in the end of this plot, LOL. I am literally dying the whole review already coming to this point.

I try to move fast forward a bit, because of this became already a bit long. The idea of Sammy betting drunk was a perfect twist, and perfect idea. Because of the "mental blackout" later in the plot, adding to the continuous unaware aspect of the plot.

How you made Sammy speak and react, because he mostly never were drunk before in his high school years, was just amazing. It literally reminded me on myself, when I had my first high school party, and it was sooo damn ironic, because mostly everything in this plot happened to me too. Not the shrinking part of course hahaha. But I also got so drunk that I had to throw up, and then waking up the nest day, I didnt remember much anymore from the night before. But I also remember I spoke in such same silly ways like you made Sammy speak, and it was so cute, and fitting at the same time... and, so humiliating and cruel towards Vince.

And making it again follow logic after logic, after drinking so much at a party, it's obvious the teens using the bathroom a lot. Just loved the idea of Sammy not wanting to stand in the line, mostly because of being so drunk, searching for a 2nd toilet in the house... the home, of Vince, who, of course would use his own, private toilet too upstairs. FANTASTIC idea of where the transformation / shrinking happened.

And from here, the plot became god like. It was honestly one of the most thrilling and hot plots I read before on here. I always loved your more cruel tf plots in the past, but this is just a master peice, and I hope this story will have lots more in this same style. Please dont end this story too soon, there are so many things coming to my mind, having lots of future chapters. Also hope you wont "ruin" the story of boring "sex" between Sammy + a girl, that wouldnt really fit in the flow of this story, and there are enough others on this site. This story is literally like a sarcastic, dark ironic Halloween story, like Tales from the crypt or the Goosebumps books, and I always wished to read a story like this. Youre truly my hero and my favorite author.

best chapter so far, just umf