Date: March 26 2017 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
continue please!!!!!
Date: January 22 2017 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
hey man. hope you will have time again soon to continue this story, looking forward to the next chapters!
Date: January 01 2017 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
happy new year!! hope youll have time soonto continue this story, its my favorite right now I am desperatly looking for updates
Date: December 24 2016 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
happy holidays!! hope youll get time again to write the next part
Date: December 14 2016 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hope you liked my reviews and ideas and I hope so much youll maybe use them in umcpoming chapters. Write back if you like, I would love more than anything to talk back and forth some mails with you! You're like my favorite author on here and I never met anyone who seem to have so many things in common. You school m/m tf stories, now Sammy and the one before are one of the most thrilling Ive read on here, seriously. Especially the butt mocking part in the alst one where the boy spread his ass apart and slowly put his anus on the toys mouth. I would love to see some way more darker things happening in he Sammy plot without Samy even knowing he did this to people. Like the fruit fly tf of some poor boys, and of course the teacher turned into asshole idea, and the boys casually talking about him ocking him, while he has to listen to them, where the one skinny skater boy just be like ugh, whatever, I need to take a shit, or them talking about having an itch down there, not wiped properly. And the poor teacher screaming in his mind, not realized yet where he was, and then later vomitting with all the taste a gigantic soft turd out, then not even wiping properly and the boy going back to his friends. Toilet paper tf would be cool too, of course some food tf like a tiny gummybear ot m&m, mixed with lots of normal ones, and the poor guy getting delayed to watch some kid snacking on them, storing them back in his school backpackage, then eating again during playing video games at home, or even seeeing the boy masturbating after school, and then snacking on them. One guy becoming part of a tiny cum stain in a boys boxers, to have the experience to be wahshed away, but just a week later of wearing and ending on the boys rooms floor as dirty pants. Ending as a skid mark in the back rea of a boxers, his senses all still there aka his face making a tiny brand inside the back area, direytly where the asshole would touch it. Ending as a fleshlight, a cumstain on the bed cover. Hope to see so many more to come. You're an incredible author.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2016 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
just pure splendid
[Report This]Date: December 07 2016 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
so happy I came along here, please more male stories, most on here are gts and I enjoy also male stories please continue. unware shrinking and curse or tf are also a huge favorite part of mine. could you please let sammy stay unaware, thinking it was just a dream or because he got it wrong of trying, he just doesn't believe anymore he had any powers? please please please let him stay unaware it is so much better. please continue hope the story gets lots of more to come.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2016 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
good stuff, unaware pairing and all, good story telling. maybe have some animal vore in a chapter. maybe a class has a aquarium with fish and one guy becomes a tiny grub the kids feed to a fish.
Date: December 06 2016 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter :)
Keep up the nice work.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2016 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am no fan of "testicle vore" or actually worse, penis vore, I know it's a big thing under authors but geez, didn't they pay attention during biology classes in school? I know you didn't do it here, but so many authors do penis vore and the shrunken guy ending or swimming in the testicle or scrotum. I always hate plots like that! First thing the testicles arent hollow, they are like a solid object with microscopic pores inside producing the sperm cells. Then there is no connection through the penis into the scrotum or from the testicle into the scrotum ... I think it would had been way more cooler if the guy literally became a single microscopic sperm cell, screaming in his head zooming out to Sammy, pointing out, there was a tiny droplet of sperm fluid slowly been drying into his boxers of bed cover, and the poor guy lost as a invisible tiny sperm cell, lost in a tiny cum stain in Sammys boxers, or on his bed cover. He could even have rubbed the other day with a finger over the tiny white stain, be like, oops, hope mom doesn't see this, plopping his butt on the cover, standing up. It would had made sense actually, the guy not beeing the blue fluid then too, and Sammy had no clue about what happened, because, 99% of the sperm fluid isn't produced in the testicle. It's made way upper in the prostate / "cowpers gland". So Sammys cum would just look normal to him, with a tiny, amoeba sized blue sperm cell, invisible to the naked eye, under millions of other sperm cells. Maybe you could use that for another tf in a future chapter.
Enough biology talk, I had to though because of you mentioned it was Sammys favorite subject :D Last but not least, amazing chapter. And I can't wait for the next to come.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2016 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
I was waiting for this so much, yes!! This is now my new favorite story of yours and I hope it will continue a lot of chapters. I am just in love with Sammy, and how you make him, also his cute same as nice best friend Luke.
The writing style is just perfect, all fits so well, please continue like it. I mean how you make them talk, the thoughts of Sammy and going with him through his day, like classes, going to school, waking up, going home, the bus ride, doing homework, and doing some private tasks ha, all is awesome!
Some may say it was boring reading going throguh his school classes, but please continue like this, it's so good! I love longer and more detailed, but also realistic plots. And I think this is your best work so far compared to these topics of building up a plot and characters.
I absolutely loved the beginning of Sammy totally already forgot about yesterdays events and then even told himself it mostly was all just a dream. This makes such a fantastic unaware plot. I was actually hopinh for a more unaware parts, and please continue like this.
Here comes though two critism I have:
It would had been way more thrilling, if Sammy didn't find out at the end, and just casually jerked off into a tissue, wiping it away, and letting it casually fall to his rooms floor. And the semen just looking normal, not being blue. Hope you wont change directions, I would love to stay Sammy unaware about his powers. It's so much more thrilling, if he accidentially changes people without knowing it, and puts them in horrible nightmares.
The other is, I think it would be way more erotic to think about the transformed people not losing their consciousness, but they just can't move/talk of course. But still they had all their senses and even could see, but from outside no one would see them of course and just see the normal surface they melted into / becoming it.
I loved the bus ride so much of creating this plot, of Sammy be the typical twink who is laughed and bullied through school. Him being so skinny and seens as a wimp from lots of other boys. But there it even shines so much of his best friend Lucas, even wanting to help, I loved that conversation so much!
The bathroom part and later Sammy having "blue balls" was so hot. And how he didn't realize he had shrunk the boy outside who shotued that rude words to him, and then him having that itch during classes, even thought of "please don't let that boy be in my class", all was perfect writing style.
I think you read my previews reviews, and there is nothing more I would wish if you could use my ideas during future chapters, that would be like a dream coming true.
I hope you will let Sammy still stay most of the time unaware about his powers, and him just not really believing in them, or even yet thinking he had them, making it so much more thrilling to think about, he could always turn someone into anything, withouth even knowing.
I also would welcome it if you let some at least stay their consciousness and senses. Especially for turning people into flys, a boys anus, the tiny back area in someones cotton underpants, becoming normal cum and wiped away absorbed by an tissue or boxers, becoming the smelly stain in their while casually wearn again the next day during school and baking during classes under their skinny jeans, the honor or actually nightmare when someone becomes an anus and then having the first experience to vomit out a bowl movement. I would love to see maybe the gym teacher or Sammys math teacher become that, like the ideas I told in my review, with the boys speaking in a rude way about that "asshole" and the surprise exam, and the drawing of sucking the boys ass on the paper.
Would also love to see some boys becoming tiny flys and then try to get help from Sammy in his room, and end as a smear on a rolled up newspaper and the other ending with a turd on him in the bathroom.
Hope so much you will continue in this amazing innocent style. It was so nice to follow Sammy through his days, I can't get enough of this. It's such a thrilling idea of this twink boy going through his school life, and having no idea he turned people into objects or parts of bodys.
You totally deserve 10 out of 10 I wish I could give more. Thank you for writing, you made my day. Maybe if you like add your email or just a spam email on your profile, and if I see it I would love to mail you! You have so many ideas I loved in all your work, so similar to what I enjoy too. It would be awesome to meet a friend having the same fantasies.
Have a great day man!! Looking forward for lots of more chapters in this story.