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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is a very beautiful written story with lots of realistic details what shrinking actually means in both possible pleasure and pain. Love the strength of their relationships. I find shrinking the ultimate trust game. Who will betray you and who will be at your side.

A world so normal can change into a super dream or nightmare. I hope they will get their revenge too and I mean real revenge. Not short torture, but a torture that will destroy her soul in all her next lives.

I and many others will look forward to more chapters.This is really a good  read and was glued to every word. Please keep writing.

10/10 for now!

Reviewer: DrCreep Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2016 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like how your story starts off with a brief synopsis that makes reading the previous chapters completely unnecessary which aleves a lot of stress for the reader who is new to this storyline.

I also like the intetspective moments that are colored with events and dialogue that also helps the reader imagine the scenes that you have set up.

I can not wait to see what happens on their mission to get pay back and/or apprehend that evil Janet!

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