Date: November 10 2016 3:12 PM Title: Meet John!
Hello! I can't seen Chapter 6. Do you can something?
Date: November 08 2016 9:23 PM Title: Home Sweet Home
Butt
Date: November 07 2016 8:50 PM Title: Meet John!
If I was in his place I'd choose butt!!! Smother him with the booty!!! Please?! Giantess booty is the best and add lots of it and very detailed ;)
Author's Response:
Nice choice. I would say it'd be my second choice, after boobs. Maybe third, or at least tied with boobs. And in John's poop predicament he will be experiencing a posetively plump posterior placing itself in his presence. (Aliteration is always fun isn't it)
There will be a nice helping of it in this story. just like potatoes at Thanksgiving.
Thanks Spider-Man for your great review, I always appreciate them. Thank you again, Have a Great Day!
Date: November 03 2016 10:47 PM Title: Meet John!
Love the story!! Dont stop! Maybe include some Ms.Little with her nylon covered feet!
Author's Response:
Hey man, thanks a ton for your review. Very much appreciated. And I won't be. I have a plan set for this story, and I plan on making it a series of sorts. And Ms. Little, sorry to say, might ot be making an apperance for some time. But Hers is one I look forward to the most actually.
So thanks for your review, Have a Great Day!
Date: November 02 2016 6:33 AM Title: Meet John!
You have made a very interesting start here. I like that it has seemed rather normal at the beginning, without fetish reference, until late in the chapter. The assistance of Ms. Deforest in the gym during his weight lifting was unexpected (I'm not familiar with weight lifting as to techniques, so her being able to support his lift seems strange to me.) But no matter... Your story seems well written, other than the odd bit of punctuation ('Ms. Littles desk': 'Ms. Little's desk.', etc.) Keep up the good work and you'll be a first-class story teller in no time! You appear to be a 'natural'.
Author's Response:
Hey man thanks for your review, It is very much appreciated. And as for. Ms. Deforests assisntance in the gym, The technique she has is what I use with my partner when I'm in the gym, Arms under the lifters, right behind them, almost touching, sqatting down with them as they go. If they fail, the lifter will more or less fall in your arms, and you can help them get the weight racked up (Put back). And he punctuation is an issue I've had for some time, in a lot of writting. Both for leisure and in school. I try to keep them to a minimum. But thank you for pointing that out, I'll do my best to be more reticent in the future.
Thanks for your compliment and Have a great day!