[Report This]Date: January 20 2019 11:17 PM Title: Communication.
Well, this one did take me a while D: Had some stuff going on with graduations... I'm here now though!
I did guess Abby was going to be used as a pacifier, though I expected something like a half-body in. Still, it was a very cute scene! I think a good job was made describing Ivy, and I'm intrigued in why she got so close to Abby so quickly. COuld be just child innocence, but there might be something more? Also, petting Ivy's tongue sounds adorable haha.
That being said, my mental image of Ebon panicking while watching Ivy sucking Abby should be very cute too! I really enjoy seeing different aspects of her. At first I thought she was going to make Ivy sleep before taking Abby back but seems that didn't work?
There's an interesting back and forth between Abby and Ebon, whether they end up as friends after this or not, I'm sure Ebon will see Abby in a different light after this.
How Eve theratened Ebon could've been guessed, but is very nice to see her defending Abby to such an extend.
Now I'm really interested in seeing what Ebon will do next. And, I really hope Abby can help her somehow with her wing...
See ya! Have fun writing the next one!
Author's Response:
I guess it took me a bit to get back to you too. 3:
Thank you for the review Kenta, I'm glad you enjoyed Ivy's introduction. But how did you know I was going to use Abby as a Pacifier? I was hoping to make it a surprise. X'D
I'll have my next chapter up shortly. I hope you enjoy what follows!
Date: January 01 2019 7:40 PM Title: Communication.
Hey man. I apologize for the lack of reviews on my part. I'm not in a good place as far as mindset goes right now but your story always lifts my spirits. I'm glad we might be seeing what made Ebon the misanthrope that she is today. It was shocking seeing her bribe Abby with her "metal" seeing how prideful she is. I hope Eve threatening to kill Ivy was just a threat because I don't think Eve is cruel enough to kill a baby like how we saw in her past lol Ivy is a baby, right? Anyways, I guess we better prepare for another painful past because with the hate Ebon harbors for humans, something tells me it's probably going to be the most tragic.
Happy New Years to you and FW :)
Author's Response:
By all means Nothingness, don't feel guilty about anything. I didn't want to make anyone feel bad with my comments. Any time someone messages me it lifts me up and fills me with joy. I know what you mean about being in a bad place, so take your time to yourself.
As for what Ebon and Eve discussed, you might never know. Or maybe I'll elaborate later. Who knows~
And yes, Ivy is a baby as far as Dragon's are concerned. Think a one or two year old in appearence, although, more feral.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2019 8:57 AM Title: Communication.
realy nice chapter i get the feeling ebon has a realy tragic past dealing with humans but i also get the feeling she is the one to nuke abbys family
Author's Response:
Hmm, intresting take on their pasts. I like where your mindset is. But, you'll just have to wait and see what happens.