[Report This]Date: June 16 2018 10:58 PM Title: The Bad News...
Welcome back! Of course, I don't hate you. I'm really glad you're back to writing.
A bit refreshing to see Abby being the one making mistakes this time, even if it meant hurting Casey's feelings by not noticing her intentions ;_; Keep going Casey, I'm sure you will manage to surprise her at some point...
Liked the way the small teen moves around the dullahan, climbing and sliding down her. It's very cute. Makes it even cuter for when they're together.
Too bad the nice moments went downhill though. I noticed Casey had moments of self-blaming but didn't expect it to be that bad. That moment with Abby can be a start for a process of self-acceptance, hope they keep working things out together.
And well, the confession. The answer was as expected but is good that Casey hears it directly from Abby herself, especially now that she seems at a low point with her self-esteem. Cheers Casey, there's still chance. Hope she manages to call Abby Storen someday.
"This was the first time she had ever cried in happiness" This part got me a bit, is really sad to think someone never experienced bliss like that before. Now wonder how Eve will feel after learning Casey heard it first. Makes me also think about what Najia's opinion will be about this when she wakes up. Sounds like she could be very understanding about it but who knows.
As for Kari's secret. I expected something along those lines but still, poor her. Abby wasn't sure whether she or Casey was more excited about her growing back, but I'm not sure whether Kari or Abby is more devasted about the bad news.
And well, it's also a bit sad to hear the story might be coming to its end but is something expected from all stories, yet I'm glad to see there's still more to come. Though, I wonder if you have something planned with other girls than the ones you mentioned in the previous review?
Anyway, hope you manage to get back into writing pace, just don't overwork yourself!
See ya.
Author's Response: I’m really glad you’re still reading my story Kenta. Your reviews are always nice to read and reflect on. :D I wanted to show the closeness of the two this chapter so I’m glad that you got that vibe from it with how Abby and Casey interacted with one another. Even if it took a darker turn later on. I’m also glad though that you understood the weight behind her confessions and in turn Abby’s. I always worry I’m not writing a feeling strong enough sometimes... ;-; I guess I might have foreshadowed to much with Kari, didn’t I? I hope it was still somewhat of a surprise. We’ll be going into that and into her next chapter so don’t worry. Also don’t think I’m not going to give any of the other girls any more attention. They weren’t just there for filler after all. XD I promise I won’t overwork myself but I will be writing again soon! Don’t you worry! Thanks again Kenta :D
[Report This]Date: June 16 2018 9:22 AM Title: The Bad News...
Oh, wow, you are back! Nice chapter by the way, I totally didn't expect that the reason Kari was like that, was that she couldn't turn Abby back. ...Hmmm, I'm wondering how the others are going to react to this, Cassey seemed enthusiastic... Hey wait, did Eve knew? I mean she saw the future, or the paths that could lead to the future...?
Though it is cute how Cassey acts towards Abby, I still ship EveXAbby with all my heart.
Are you going to explain Kari's backstory in the next chapter?
Oh, and I almost forgot! When are you going to update next chapter? Hope it doesn't take over two months again xD
Author's Response: Don’t worry about what Eve does or doesn’t know. Kari has enough to worry about without an angry vampire hovering over her :3 I will go on to explain more of that later on. Don’t think that I added in the clairvoyance for no reason. I’m glad you enjoy Eve & Abby together but it will be some tough decisions once the time comes. I will be going into Kari’s past shortly, yes. As for if it’s next chapter or not, you’ll just have to wait and see. :P I-I promise I won’t take two months this time! M-Maybe...
Date: June 15 2018 6:17 PM Title: The Bad News...
I'm sooo glad you're back! T-T I was just thinking about your story and then... Boom! I see an update. Firgive me for not leaving reviews up frequently but I hope you know that I caught up and read this insane chapter!
At this point, I'm with Abby. Both Casey and Eve put their heart and souls into their respective dates with Abby and truly loves her as she does them and this mate thing is really a sacred thing. I should have known there was more to Casey's past. I don't remember if I said this in a previous review or someone else said it but deep inside, Casey seems to be the most sensitive out of the girls despite her tough exterior.
In all honesty, IMO I think Casey has the best powers. I alway thought the ability to manipulate shadows was pretty cool plus, her shadows seem to take on almost any shape or size so versatility plays a factor in that.
I had a feeling that was what Kari was going to say :( but I was hoping against hope it might be something different. Perhaps Naija might have a solution?
And about Naija, I just have a speculation here but the gang seems to think Naija will let Abby stay in the cave but what's Naija's backstory? I may have overlooked something but she doesn't seem to have a huge disdain humans but what if she does deep inside her heart but doesn't show it in order to be a strong role model to her girls?
Lately, I haven't been seeing a lot of stories that catch my eyes pn the site so you do not know how happy I was when I saw an update from you! I love this story so so much and hope you can keep updating! :)
Author's Response: I’m glad you liked the chapter Nothingness, and I’m glad to be back and at it again. :D I’ll try to have a new chapter up shortly so I’m glad you caught up. I was worried everyone might have forgotten about my story but it doesn’t look like that thankfully. “XD As for Najia, don’t think I plan on leaving her past unanswered. She will have some story time and there will most definitely be a point where she has a one on one with Abby about everything. That, I can assure you of. Thank you for leaving me a review. It really made me feel welcomed coming back to read it after all this time. :)