Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2018 12:17 AM Title: Grief, And Sorrow

This one took me a bit longer to read, I was even interrupted thrice while trying. But Anyway, I finally finished!

Nice to know a bit more about Yu's powers. She seems pretty powerful so I wonder what's her classification on the scale? Though, maybe her species isn't really classified as it's so mysterious.

For her past, it was indeed very sad. While it was interesting the way Yu managed to take the blonde's place, the outcome, well... Also, pretty brutal what the other girl did and how no one stopped her. Was it because of her being of the high class?

And, it was a nice touch Yu going to get in with her "real" appearance by the end but, well, it was too late...

I'm curious about Abby's way of seeing things now. At first, she was completely on the human's side and as the story moved on, she was going towards neutrality. Now, however, she seems to be completely on the others' side. I mean this because she didn't seem to think anything weird about the idea of Yu taking the other girl identity and actually deceiving Clarette. I was a bit bothered that not much of this was touch upon but glad to see Abby did mention it when lecturing Yu about how she should've told the truth and how it might have been worse if she didn't appear at the moment. And that's especially true since we don't know what might've been of Clarette if Yu didn't come into her life...

Also, I might know already why Yu can't really talk, was it the "price" she paid for that last help towards her mate?

I have to say Yu seems even more adorable each chapter. And is good that Abby finally made her mind. However, I feel things won't be that easy from now on anyways.

There was also a hint of where are Eve and the other girls I guess? Though no idea what place is lightened enough.

Eager to see what will be taking place on the next one.

See ya~

Author's Response:

Glad you were able to get to my story Kenta, I'm always eager to see your reviews. Their very insightful to read. :D

This story takes place in the mid-sixteenth century, so classifications in social status do come into play. So I would say yes, being in an upper cast does mean one tends to be a bit more... of a bitch. Pardon my language. :P

I think you have a good way of viewing Yu's past but let me turn that around so you see both sides please~

Yu is a being who literally gives up her identity to be with her love and mate. She'll become whatever she needs to be and give her mate everything she desires and more. This is the love depth of a Doppelganger. She is giving up, everything from her own life to fill the hole for her mate because Clarette, is now her purpose in life. While I don't disagree that Abby didn't bring it up, consider both situations. I hoped that Clarette was written in how I intended her to be and not as someone who could just pick herself back up after what had happened. 

Yu's intervention saved Clarette. But, it also doomed her as well. See where the coin comes into play? I do wonder and have toyed with what would have happened had she not shown up at all, but, if that happened then Yu wouldn't exist. 3:

I like your perspective on her intentions. No one else bothered to point that out. It was interesting to see what you thought. I hope that doesn't mean you don't like Yu anymore though...    ;-;

And as for the price she paid, don't worry about it. ;)

Also in regards to Abby's opinions on humans and monsters, I would think your opinions would change to if you learned that animals can talk, feel and act like humans, and show apathy and remorse for others. I've done something similar to this story as I did with my last but one stark difference is that Abby, could potentially be the cause of a lot of these girls problems inadvertently because of who she is and what shes's done. And this is one of the things that weigh's on her.  Sorry if a balance seems off but it's deliberate. And I don't plan on changing it either, much.

I'll be getting to the others soon as well, so don't worry about them either. Or... perhaps really worry! :D

I love keeping people guessing xD 

 

Talk to you later Kenta~ :3

Reviewer: Lucia1312 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2018 6:25 PM Title: Grief, And Sorrow

So, so, so, sad T-T, I figured Yu had a tragic story, but... It's so depressing. Though, the story kind of reminded me of Romeo and Juliet, (Not only because of the similar name xD), the thing that reminded me of it is that Romeo and Juliet, did kill theirselves, just like Clarette did, and Yu attempted to do, because of their love, AND misunderstandings. Romeo killed himself when he though Juliet died, and Clarette killed herself because she though that Yu didnt like her. I blame communication xD

However, it's still good that Abby is staying, I figured she would, but always expect the unexpected. :'D

Chapter summary in feeling: Expect a happy chapter because of how the chapter starts, then be depressed because of what Yu had to go through, and finally be happy because Abby is staying. Cough cough, if she is not killed before that actually happens... Cough cough

When are you going to update the next chapter? 

Author's Response:

Huh, I never thought about the concept of Romeo and Juliette when I wrote this actually but I can see where you're coming from with that idea. There are definitely similarities between them. Thanks for the new point of perspective. It was interesting to make the connections. :3 

I'll try to update sooner than last time. The next chapter shouldn't be as long as this one had been so it should take less time. Thank you for your review as always, they're very analytical. :D