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Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2018 1:17 AM Title: Alone in the Dark?

Hi hi ^^

Yu is pure love! I fear she will make it more difficult for me to choose a favorite now since I was already having enough trouble. I liked doppels a lot already but this girl was just totally adorable.

Though, lots of mystery surrounds her. I can't conclude too much from the current chapter but it does seem like a really tragic past. Also, I wonder why she's helping Abby. Maybe she looks like her previous mate or something similar? Or maybe she's allied with Eve in some way. I suppose it should be really important since she's going through a lot for the tiny. Did she have some plan in case Abby didn't allow her to get her energy...? It's also uncertain for me if the other girls know about her.

Also, very interesting and mysterious way for her to collect energy. I wonder if Yu was just with her eyes closed or maybe took a different form...? Also from I can gather I think she vored Abby in some way to extract even her saliva or something similar to that.

On that note, is she really healed? I hope she's not just transforming and fooling Abby into believing she is indeed alright now...

Anyway, interesting chapter. Really does makes me want to know more about Yu in different ways. Though I also wonder what's going on on Ebon's side.. Whichever you're doing next, I'm sure it'll be interesting too.

As for the secrets, I don't know. Feels a bit frustrating not being able to guess some stuff in a bit. Though, if related to the imgur, maybe "..."? You might understand if so.

See ya~



Author's Response:

I'm surprised you asked that. Why she's helping her. Attention to detail always warrants my appreciation. :3

As for why though that will be shown as the chapters go on. Don't worry though, Yu still has time on her hands. And as for her hands, don't worry either. They're healed. Also, her plan never included taking essence from Abby, to begin with so if you think that's why she was helping her, think again. :P 

In regards to her intimate moment with Abby, that's all in the mind's eye. I wanted to make it questionable to the readers meaning, she could have swallowed her, could have inserted her, or perhaps even of drowned her. There is no definite answer for what she did and not even Abby knows herself... But, I know~ ;)

And lastly, as for Ebon, don't expect her to show up anytime soon. Angering a Vampire is a fatal mistake...

 

For this, I'll leave for now. Thank you for the in-depth review as always Kenta, they're always so wonderful to read. :) 

 

But, I will say this, considering only you seemed to catch it... As for my secret, I put into this post, you're on the right track.

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Reviewer: Coal Wingston Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2018 5:46 PM Title: Alone in the Dark?

Can’t wait!!!
P.S. don’t strain yourself

Author's Response: I never do. This story is one if my favorite activities. Life’s more of a strain on it really, lol. Glad to see a new face, welcome to my world :D

Reviewer: Lucia1312 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2018 4:05 PM Title: Alone in the Dark?

I was riiight~ The two moments were the ones I said, Im proud of myself... xD

Yu is so cute!a340;(*^▽^*)/ Though its sad that she lost her mate. I'm guessing that she lost her mate close before Najia found her, right? #PrayForYu

When are you going to update the next chapter?



Author's Response: I’ll be going more into Yu’s past in the next chapter so you’ll soon find out. As always the time frame tends to be between 1-2 weeks but I promise to try sooner! Also, you might have cheated because of my hint, :3 Also, I see what Yu did there :P

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